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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
Review:
interesting
Review By [spring] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Any hope of a sequel?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thedruid
Review:
A good beginning, hopefully this will make a few stories!
Comments from author:
Hopefully. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Teri
Review:
Looks like a kind of darkly funny story. A nice idea. Are you going to continue with Dawn's adventures or is this a one time get you thinking of what could be idea?

I read through your reviews (something I always do) I saw that one said that the Tok'ra don't keep you alive long with Cancer as shown with Jacob. That isn't precisely true. Jacob died because Selmak was dieing and did not separate from him in time because of the project they were working on. It was implied that if Jacob had been able to separate in time he would have continued to live a normal human life span. They had said before that Selmak had cured the cancer, of course, once she was gone I don't know if it would have reoccured. Thought that might help.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. I recently just started watching SG-1 and I'm only up to early Season 8 but I did know that Jacob was gonna die. Just didn't know how but thanks for sharing. (and I don't mean that in a sarcastic sense, I really did mean thanks for sharing)

To answer your question, it really depends on whether inspiration hits but hopefully there will be a sequel in the future.
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jammiesMM
Review:
If she met Jacob then she knows the "snakeheads" don't change gender when they take over so why would she even ask about Glory? Just wondering. thx for sharing
Comments from author:
When I was writing the story, I thought Dawn would ask if Glory was a Goa'uld because of the fact that Glory claimed she was a Hell-God. Thanks for the review.
Review By [jammiesMM] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
So Dawn is still dying - a symbiote doesn't keep you alive all that long if you have cancer, as shown by Jacob Carter - and this story is marked as humour? Does not compute.
Comments from author:
Sorry that I didn't make it clear that Dawn is still dying. I'll rewrite it to include that. I figured it would be looked at as kind of dark-sense of humor. If it's not that, then I'll change it. Thank you for your review and constructive crit. I appreciate it =)
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from magicalbookworm
Review:
Interesting start. I hope you decide to continue this!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I may write a sequel in the future if the inspiration hits me but for now it's just a one-shot.
Review By [magicalbookworm] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
pretty interesting
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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