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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Ooookay! Big windup, let's see the pitch!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [29 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from jujukittychick
Review:
awesome story line so far, hope you get back around to working on it again, i'd love to see more of how newly young xander handles going back to highschool as well as what this trouble he was sent back for is. great job on these :)
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting happenings ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [5 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Ansku
Review:
Intriguing :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [25 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from spring
Review:
I love this.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [spring] • Date [25 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from MistieMossflower
Review:
Another great story. ^_^
Review By [MistieMossflower] • Date [9 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I think I read the end of this story before, but just wanted to comment on re-reading it that I like how you have Hammond very respectful of Xander's former rank and experience. I'm uncertain if I have read any of the high school series, but did just read your war crossover with a certain SHEILD commander. Let me say that based on what you showed me the situation Xander's home dimension seems much worse - and perhaps was the one where that story took place. If something started in the SGC dimension that effected his dimesnion later in time, then by changing things here he might also be changing the history of his own home dimension in a good way - even if it does then leave him a man displaced in space-time (because his own history would have been changed). Thanks for sharing the story -- and also so sorry you had to have Xander tortured in hell for 10 years to make it happen.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it. As for the tie in with the SHIELD story, it's the same Xander. Fury visits Xander's dimension & then, ten years after he leaves for home, Xander is wished to the SGC dimension.

Kinda confusing I guess, but a person doesn't need to read about Fury & Xan to follow the SGC story and vice-versa.

Still, glad you are enjoying. :-)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from manic
Review:
Still loving the series. I can't wait to see Xander and Johnny in school together. God help the staff ;) Thanks again for sharing, and now I'm off to the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thank you. :-) Glad you enjoyed. School is coming real soon.
Review By [manic] • Date [11 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I love this story.

But there is no Major Colonel rank in USAF

the officer ranks go (top to bottom):
General of the Air Force / General / Lieutenant General / Major General / Brigadier General /
Colonel / Lieutenant Colonel / Major / Captain / 1st Lieutenant / 2nd Lieutenant

:) (wikipedia)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [23 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Duskie
Review:
I've reviewed this before but I read it again and still wanted more again so let me complain. theirs no Colorado Springs High in your Colorado Springs High series. Hope you decide to write another part, someday.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ElfgirlJen
Review:
I really enjoyed your story. Poor Xander to have seen so how and be ripped way from his reality then dumped into this one has a 15 year old.
PLease update soon!
Review By [ElfgirlJen] • Date [9 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ThunderGod
Review:
reread the series again..and am hopeing to see more written in this series..so rock on dude or dudette and write more..please...with sugar and extra candy on top..:}..LOL

blame the lack of sleep

ThunderGod
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [1 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Ladeia
Review:
Please write more of this story!! Need more as soon as possible. *best puppy dog eyes*
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great series so far.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Crydwyn
Review:
I've just read both the stories in this series and it looks to have great potential, I can definitely see Jonny and Xander getting on well, although obviously I'll have to wait until your next installment to see any interaction between the two of them.

Fingers crossed you're going to continue the series

~ Cry
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [19 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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