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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from breve
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its been 5yrs but I'm going to beg for an update anyway. please?
Review By [breve] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VampireCow
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I've been waiting for this to update for some time, but it only just now occurred to me... that detective is Zebrowski, isn't it? He's the only one I know that has such a horrible car interior. His kids are going to be upset when they find out their Britney CD is missing.
Review By [VampireCow] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from yakuit
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Let me sing you a love song

About what I feel in my heart;

You're a flower in bloom.

In the dark, in the gloom,

It's you who brightens my day.

How many ways do I need you?

Every day, every way, come what may.

......................................................

Happy valentine
Hope you continue soon
Review By [yakuit] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from clarityfades
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More please? Pretty, pretty, please? I know it's been quite a while since this fic's been updated. But I gotta know Zerbrowski's reaction to his "kidnapping"! LOL Especially since it was Buffy doin' said containment. Plus, I do wanna know how Buffy gets him out of the car & into the hotel...& definitely want to see how the pack, Anita & the rest of the 'Verse handles a Slayer dropping (literally) in their laps. :D
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [26 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from majbitca
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Am enjoying the story very much. A different angle from what I usually see. I re-read it every so often in hopes that an update will come soon. Pretty please?
Review By [majbitca] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from mac
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Great story! Really enjoying it so far. Are you coming back to finish it? Would be a shame not to
mac x
Review By [mac] • Date [11 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WingedSeraph
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Such a well written, intelligent story! Seems a shame not to continue it.
Review By [WingedSeraph] • Date [24 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from wickedfire
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this is so funny! Why haven't you continued it? It's really good.
Review By [wickedfire] • Date [21 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Jorrie
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Oh wow, this is fascinating. It'd be really interesting to see how things turn out for Buffy. I really hope you pick back up on this ficcy. I'll be on the look out in case you do. Please do continue! I can't wait. XD
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from bunnyears
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wow for once anita is taking the "bad" news well instead of getting more bitchy and instantly wanting to shoot something.

"For a man and a cop, this guy had some seriously weird taste in music. Come on, who in the world listened to TLC anymore? Savage Garden? Mandy Moore?

With a screech, Buffy slammed on the breaks, never once looking up as she gawked at the disc in front of her, the butterfly, the pastel lettering, and glanced in the rear-view mirror to contemplate the obviously deranged, unconscious, man still in the back seat before glancing down again.

Britney?

She bit her lip, and checked the mirror once more to make certain he wasn’t awake. Rolling down the window, she decisively chucked the offending thing out it. Another second of consideration and the Mandy Moore disc followed it’s path.

She was the Chosen One. It was her duty to make the world a safer place."

this is simply one of the best scene so far. i have read this part few times and it still cracks me up every time i read it.

nononono you cannot stop here. i beg thee to update very soon for the sake of my sanity.
pretty please :)
Review By [bunnyears] • Date [5 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from bunnyears
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hihihihi
this chapter had me laughing out loud many times :)
look out ab-world here comes hurricane buffy. i guess richard got hit the hardest by the buffynator (as xander once called her). typical buffy, getting into more trouble without really meaning to.
Review By [bunnyears] • Date [5 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bunnyears
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this story is great so far. i like the light tone of the story. buffy it seems is full of life again. i really love this part of her. you really nailed buffy's character.
your writing skill really match the buffyverse. it's light, funny but with dark undertones.just hidden below the surface like good ol sunnydale.
one thing that concerns me though is her reaction to richard. i understand the lust part, i just hope you won't have the both of them falling in love with each other after a few chapters.
although anita doesn't seem to be the big love for richard as angel is to buffy, he does love her and a part of him still wants to be with her. and buffy of course still loves angel although she's moving on. i really hate it when two characters just simply fall in love with each other without any reasons to how and why.
is buffy's strength altered in now she's in the ab dimension. i just hope you won't make the slayer part of buffy some kind of a beast. according to the buffyverse the shamans forced the essence of a pure demon into the chosen girl. and according to the abverse a demon is different from a were or vampire.

well i'm off to read and enjoy the next chapters.
Review By [bunnyears] • Date [5 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from deathgeonous
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SHe kidnapped Z? (Can't spell the guy' name right now) Hilarious!!! Thanks for writing this, hopew to see more soon, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Becca
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I love this story. Please update soon I can't wait for zerbrowski to wake up n I hope buffy does end up w/someone. These fics don't always pair when they say they do.
Review By [Becca] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)Mari
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I'm very impressed with your dialogue; it's fun, fast, and has that snarky edge that makes the characters more interesting.

There was one thing that made me tilt my head and squint at the screen--Buffy's not usually the type to just take someone else's car. In the series, she does take someone's house, but that's when she's beyond desperate and pretty much suicidal. In my opinion, you've got her far too perky and quippy to be desperate enough to mug someone for their car when they had stopped to help her anyway.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Mari] • Date [5 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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