Review of chapter "Ouroborus" from Letomo
I've been rereading this sequence of stories, and wanted to compliment this chapter in particular. You fit in why Krypton was destroyed, how the Supermen get their power, especially holding on to it longer than other Kryptonian visitors, drop off a 'Supergirl-to-be', and advance your main over-storyline. Well done!
I usually don't like stories that try to jam too many universes together, but you somehow manage to do so amazingly well. Thanks for this whole sequence!
Review By [Letomo
] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ouroborus" from James
I have said it before and will say it again...Brilliant!!!!
Review By [James
] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ouroborus" from feekh
And it makes much more sense, now. I am truly glad I caught up on the back story, and you were right, there is much more dialogue. Not that I am saying the others are bad, cause they aren't. Just occasionally I find something that breaks with preconceived notions, this was one of those times. In general I am not fond on little dialogie pieces, but this works. So I will wait patiently for the next installment. And if I could just figure out how to add favourites, then this will be on there in a flash.
Review By [feekh
] • Date [10 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations" from DigiEmissary
I like this explanation - it has shades of Omphalos.
And with the Doctor around, there's a much greater avenue for exploration of the timeline(s)...
Review By [DigiEmissary
] • Date [9 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ouroborus" from EvilAuthor
I have the funny feeling that Illyria is going to wind up being Clark's mom.
Comments from author:
Illyria as Lara? I could almost make that work, except that she lacks some necessary parts for the job... unless I go with Byrne's Brave New World version of Krypton, where a bit of genetic material to go into the creche is enough.
Honestly, I was going a whole other direction with the whole blonde, blue tunic with the House of El 'S' symbol thing - didn't you notice?
Not that Clark the Younger will buy it after the Kara that showed up on Smallville.
Review By [EvilAuthor
] • Date [9 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Thoughts" from PunkCanuck
I've liked the series so far, EXTERMINATE, (cough) sorry.
Anyway, what happened to Illyria? In the previous fic of the series the Blue Meanie was hidden in the TARDIS as they went to Krypton. Has she just not been covered yet?
Please keep writing.
Comments from author:
Heh. Heh. Heh.
Review By [PunkCanuck
] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Visitors" from daveykins
So far, so good :
I've enjoyed the rest of the series a great deal so far. Looking forward to this unfolding.
Review By [daveykins
] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]