really hermione is ace and i fully believe that granger should be a penpal with someone like the coolest nerd geek ever, really he is the last of his kind smiley
good work and i can't wait to see how things go from here
Review By [wintergoddess] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is really great! Andrew's my favorite character, and you've done him justice - even if he does seem a little overly mature, I'll buy it. I hope you add a third chapter; don't give up!
Review By [saturnalia] • Date [6 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Love the premise... There aren't enough good Andrew fics out there, and this is really cute, pairing him up with Hermione. Can't wait to see the next installment.
Review By [Clarissa] • Date [29 Sep 06] • Not Rated
I like the idea, enough that I'm happy to jump up and down on the little voice that insists that a young Andrew and a young Hermione would have annoyed the hell out of each other :-) That said, a couple of nitpicks:
1) I'm getting slightly conflicting ideas of their relative ages. Sometimes Hermione seems much older than Andrew, sometimes not, and I'm getting a bit confused.
2) "nutters". I swear I am going to hunt down and kill the person responsible for releasing the idea that this is correct British English. "You are a nutter," or "You are nuts," or "They are nutters", but not "You are nutters." It's a perfectly ordinary noun!
3) "note from the super" is a bit of an Americanism too; there isn't really an equivalent that springs to mind over this side of the pond. I'm prepared to be corrected on that by people who actually live in flats.
Still, good stuff and eminently readable. I'll be intrigued to see how long Andrew can keep from blurting out stuff about Vampyres when he's talking to Hermione in person :-)
I think you need to separate Ron and Harry's character a bit more. They're practically identical. Even so faras grouping them in the same group about her mailing Viktor when it was solely Ron
Review By [Bluedawn] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Not Rated
OOh tosted marshmellows. Yum yum. So I'm wondering if the whole I killed my friend thing is going to come up in this story? I'm looking forward to more when you can get it out.
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Not Rated
I really love this one! Anything with Andrew is great in my book. I hope you update soon.
Comments from author:
I know, me too! I've noticed that there isn't a lot of Andrew fics, so I thought I'd try my hand at writing one. I'm so glad the response has been so positive. Thank you!!
Review By [Elliebunk] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Not Rated
This is great! There really isn't enough Andrew fic, and the idea that Hermoine could be a closet Trekkie makes me giggle maniacly. It even gives her and Andrew a contact; an international Star Trek fan club directory. (After agreeing to disagree about the thorny "Kirk vs. Picard" issue in the club newslletter, they found enough common ground to strike up a correspondance.) Please write more.
Comments from author:
Oh, I will do. Thank you for the comments, they're greatly appreciated!
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [9 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Hey, didn't you already try something like this? I loved it already at the time, and I wondered why you stopped writing it. I hope you keep writing it this time.
Comments from author:
Yes, I did try it once upon a time, but I wasn't quite sure if I liked how things were developing, so I decided to rework it. I'm very glad you liked it the first time around, and I hope you like this version just as much. Thank you!