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Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from Duskie
It is sad the pictures don't exist. You should had them to the story.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [19 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from EllandrahSylver
I never got around to reading these, but they're REALLY funny. *note to self:must remember to not laugh out loud in the computer lab*

Comments from author:
Ahhh, the pitfalls of reading fanfic in public. The first time I read the Mad Poetess and James Walkswithwind's "Domestic Piranhas" I had to be sure there was no one anywhere nearby to be startled by my shrieks of laughter. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [21 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from Zira
This is simply fabulous! You are one very talented person!...and, PLEASE continue! ;D
Comments from author:
Thank you! I don't know what possessed me to write them, but I really enjoy these little stories. I'm not opposed to continuing if I get inspired.
Review By [Zira] • Date [21 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from dulcinea
I didn't get this until I saw eponine's drawings, but now that I know the crossover... oh my goodness! This is hilarious! I hope you plan to continue with Mr. Clumsy and Little Miss Greedy. :)
Comments from author:
I had wanted to do drawings, but I didn't have the skill or patience to get them right. eponine did an excellent job of showing how the characters fit into Roger Hargreaves' world. Thanks for the encouragement; if a good story hits me, I'll definitely write it.
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [20 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Yay! Love the new Chapter!

Oh yeah, I only have one problem. When Little Miss Helpful checks the rooms, she only hears that things are quiet. She doesn't follow up on that, which is strange cause quiet might equal dead. I mean a spell really botched.

Maybe if she heard heavy breathing and pleasant whispers, or otherwise just *knew* all of them were alive and well, it'd be... less worrying to me ;)

Reply: Heh, Thanks :)
Comments from author:
Wow, you have a way scarier mind than me. I get what you're saying, though, and I'll think about making a little edit to alleviate your concerns. I have to say, the fact that you gave it this much thought is great! Thanks for the review, too.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from Sadie

Thanks so much for sharing what you did have!
Comments from author:
:o) Thank you for reading and supporting my silliness!
Review By [Sadie] • Date [2 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
In all my years of 'Adventure Gaming' I never thought of balencing buckets of holy water above doors!DARN!

Very funny enjoyed these very much indeed. I shall look out for 'Book Two'.

All the best,
Comments from author:
I was trying to think of a prank that could take out vamps, and it just came to. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [2 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
::Raises eyebrow slightly, allows corners of mouth to twitch upwards::
Comments from author:
Control yourself! I mean, I know it was an awesome chapter, but you don't have to gush. :o)
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [31 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from isuelt
these wre so good! can't wait to see more. & the fact that you can figure out who everyone is by the names & one or two lines is fantabulous!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! The identification of the characters was something I tried hard to make clear, so I'm thrilled you enjoy that facet.
Review By [isuelt] • Date [31 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mr. Quiet" from SlowMercury
I think these are really cute! I'm completely unfamiliar with the Mr. Men and Little Miss stories, but I enjoyed this. Good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I tried to make the enjoyable for people who didn't read the Little Miss and Mr. Men stories, although the style of writing is much more amusing if you read the childrens' books as well.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [31 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little Miss Trouble" from Sadie
"Instead, she made sure he wasn't a virgin anymore." I perhaps found that much too funny.
I'm loving these. Thanks so much for more!
Comments from author:
Bwahahaha! I was having trouble thinking of a plot for this one until I had that virgin sacrifice idea. It inspired me.

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Sadie] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little Miss Trouble" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Absolutely delightful!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Little Miss Trouble" from Cutiepie
Absolutely darling, and completely perfect. I adored that last one.

I just bought a computer game for my son featuring the Mr. Men and Little Miss characters. He's still a touch young for it, but I think he will enjoy it as much as he's enjoyed the books so far. Thank you for making me smile! =]
Comments from author:
Oh, thanks! I'm glad you're sharing Little Miss and Mr. Men with your son. Mine just loves them, and it's great to have something we both enjoy reading.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Little Miss Trouble" from matthew
Huh. Nifty.
Comments from author:
Yup, I thought so.
Review By [matthew] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mr. Fussy" from Afterthestorm
Ok, I'm gonna say this just once. I actually created an account on this site just so I could post a review for this fic. So don't worry about all the lazy-ass ppl who don't bother going to the trouble of reviewing a story, even if they like it. Write for yourself. If you enjoy the mental exersize, and can make yourself giggle while doing it, all the better. No matter what you write, be it fanfiction, non-fiction or stranger than fiction; some-one somewhere will either hate and\or be offended by it. That's just human nature. Ignore the idiots, cause they out-number us by like a million to one.

And by the way, I loved the story. The Mr. Men books were my absolute fav's when I was a littl'un. This might have been one of the sweetest and funniest little fics I've seen. Thank you for posting it. And sorry for ranting at you, my meds just kicked in.
Comments from author:
Wow. I'm torn between being honored that you registered just to review my story and sorry that I sent you into a rant. I mostly write stories that I personally enjoy. I can't deny, though, that knowing people are reading my work is a great impetus to carry on. I will keep writing these Mr. Men and Little Miss chapters, just because my head is full of the Scoobies and Fang gang as little round characters now.

I'm really glad you enjoy the stories, and I'm pleased to share your taste in children's books. Thanks for taking the time to read, register, and review.
Review By [Afterthestorm] • Date [16 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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