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Review of chapter "The Writing on the Wall" from MercyJones
Review:
LOVE IT! I see it's been QUITE a while since you updated. I hope you will someday though! I'm gonna track this story in my hope.
Comments from author:
It has been quite a while since I updated. Unfortunately I was really on a SVU kick when I started posting this and then my muse found other venues to love. I do plan to finish it one day though, just not sure when.
Review By [MercyJones] • Date [18 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Silent Cry For Help" from Cutiepie
Review:
Hi, just a reminder. I like this and want more, more, more! If you please, that is. The Logan/Marie one is good too, but I am especially waiting on this story. =]
Comments from author:
*snicker* I love it. I post L/R and I get a review for a totally unrelated story :) I actually had every intention of working on this story this weekend but forgot to email my copy from work to myself so I wasn't sure what I had already written, etc. and I hate rewriting things. But I'm emailing it to myself right now so I can work on it when I get home this evening.

Thanks so much for the review, it made me smile bright and early on a Monday morning, and for that you rock!!
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [6 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Writing on the Wall" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
I've just re-read the first two chapters and I still think its a great story. I'm going to put a track on it so lets have some updates please.

All the bst,
Dave T.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I am working on getting the third chapter prepared for posting!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [3 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Writing on the Wall" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Officially I have a new favorite crossover....yep I love the SVU and Buffy crossovers. I'm enjoying the slow build up....
Comments from author:
*beams and bounces* Yay - yay! *snicker* it is an awfully slow build up isn't it? I need to work on that - but all in good time. Thanks for the review...it brightened my day.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Silent Cry For Help" from Cutiepie
Review:
Wow, intense beginning. I like it. As yet another 'die-hard Faith fan', I am so glad to see this story. I don't think there can ever be enough well-written Faith stories. =] I think that I'm also impressed that you have managed to kill Faith off a time or two. I never could. And a little maiming never hurt anyone (ha, ha!) Looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thank you, thank you! Die-hard Faith fans unite! We could take over the world, we could... You'll probably get a giggle or two out of this, but when I killed Faith in my Riddick/Faith story, I cried. Big old crocodile tears were running down my face. My roomies in college thought someone had died for real, explaining I was killing a fanfic character made the whole issue a little silly. But maiming I don't shed a tear at. Faith's got a lot of crap to deal with in this story. Hopefully I'll have another chapter up in a few days.
Thanks again :)
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Writing on the Wall" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [war] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Writing on the Wall" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Another excellent chapter to this fic. Not to harp on one thing, but yeesh you have too good a way with atmosphere, descriptive dialog and narrative. :-p

I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story. I know Faith will pull through, just because she's a slayer (at least I hope she does), and I'm REALLY looking forward to her kicking ass on the critter(s) behind the attack.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for the review. I definitely appreciate the kind words. As for Faith...I can't be giving away everything about her survival...or not, now can I?

And be prepared for more goosebumps, cause I have plenty more gory, detail filled scenes ahead.

:) Thanks again for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Writing on the Wall" from chajalive
Review:
As a die-hard Faith fan, I really do hope it is not her, the victim I mean. I would appreciate you continuing your so far great story speedily, whichever way it goes.
chaja
Comments from author:
Well I don't want to spoil the upcoming chapters, but I will tell you that I'm a die hard Faith fan as well, and it is extremely difficult for me to kill her. I have only done so in one, maybe two stories, but maim her - I seem to do that in every story! Poor Faith - the abuse I dish out for her.

I'll try to come up with speedy updates. I've got a very detailed plot outline for the story, but it takes me awhile to come up with the chapters and make sure I don't miss points in my story or tell things out of order. But I'll try!!

Thanks for the review!
Review By [chajalive] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Silent Cry For Help" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
I enjoy SVU fics and I hope you continue this one.

Careful, noticed at least one silly typo back there...I think!

All the best,
Dave T.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I have many, many more chapters planned to this story.

Where was the typo? When I read over my own word some things get by me, so I would appreciate them pointed out :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [11 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Silent Cry For Help" from (Past Donor)Flint
Review:
A good beginning, like the POV writing
Comments from author:
:) Thanks.
Review By [(Past Donor)Flint] • Date [12 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Silent Cry For Help" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Very good! Spot on characters. Love to see where you take this.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [11 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Silent Cry For Help" from mrpage
Review:
Good start. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [mrpage] • Date [11 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Silent Cry For Help" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Okaaay...*shaking self* Great work on the atmosphere of the story and the description of the scene. I love SVU and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review - I'm glad that I had someone kinda freaked with the introduction scene. There is only more of that coming though, beware. This will not be a happy fic.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [10 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Silent Cry For Help" from Greywizard
Review:
Intriguing beginning here. Definitely want to see more.
Comments from author:
More you shall see, let me get through the beginning of October (best friend's wedding and I'm maid of honor) and I'll continue with this story!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [10 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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