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Bridled Fury or How Xander got his Groove back

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vilkath
Review:
A funny thought about the whole way Xander was treated was it did seem to match up with when Dawn appeared. The monks did their best to make Dawn the center of everyone's life so she would be protected from Glory, but what if they failed to see or didn't care about the long term effects of this? Everyone's relationships and world views shifted so that Dawn was the most important person in their life, even if she failed to exist before hand? How the jealous sibling thing popped into Buffy's life when her life was already complicated enough?

And then Glory was gone and Dawn's absolute need for protection faded, her blood never seemed to open portals any more after that. Yet the built in need to protect Dawn at all cost still lingered, breaking up friendships and damaging people's lives. It didn't help matters that the older Dawn got the less she wanted to be protected, so she turned into a some what resentful girl who hated everyone trying to keep her safe despite her whole existence being built for it.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
This is really really good.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [29 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from vitruvian
Review:
Hmmm... how did Robin Wood come about if Slayers are sterile?
Comments from author:
The Slayers become Sterile once they are activated from being a potential. She'd have either been pregnant or had him before she was called.
Review By [vitruvian] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
new begining, i would love to see more
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sadfru
Review:
Awesome :)
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [11 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
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Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [11 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Alltorian
Review:
Hopefully a new beginning. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [11 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ladeia
Review:
Very interesting start... hope you decide to continue this. :)
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [11 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elric
Review:
Please don't let this end. I see so much in this story I want more NOW!!!.
Review By [Elric] • Date [11 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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