Review of chapter "Chapter One" from divaslayer
Awesome story so far, I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please update soon. Please?
Review By [divaslayer
] • Date [20 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ava
Oh! Monica as a Slayer? That's interesting and makes it so that she's not the damsel in distress that she turned into by the end of the movie. *nods* A much better scenario if you ask me.
The first person from Dawn's perspective was interesting. I'm horrible at that type of writing but you pulled it off flawlessly. *pouts* And now I'm jealous - this is nothing new.
Review By [Ava
] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Not Rated