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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alexceasar
Review:
cute very cute. would love to see this expended. Good job.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
Fantastic. Loved this - Thanks!
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlameyFomorrii
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Oh! Dawn died, so they allowed her heart to be given to this other girl? But, the girl's body was rejecting it until she had the blood of Buffy. Makes sense, because Dawn was made human by using Buffy's blood, and if the heart is living on without the protective blood of the Slayer, it could collapse.


So very cool. Would be great to see more.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [6 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SassyFrass
Review:
Love the story, and totally wouldn't mind some sort of sequel if you can think of one. However, I was watching this House episode tonight, and I think Michelle's character's name was actually Melinda, not Linda. So you might want to check that out. Other than that, great story.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [10 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hungrypiranha
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I like it. Adds a whole new spin on the fandom. Unique.
Review By [hungrypiranha] • Date [7 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spikeismine
Review:
Awesome. Cool crossover choice. Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
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I MUCH prefer your version to the way this episode originally ended up (something so disturbing about House's final examination of the kid in the elevator, even if it did save her life). Very neat!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [20 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrendanM
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I liked it, but there needs to be a little more backstory. You may want to explore how Dawn became Linda beyond stating that it was related to the key, and why her health slid downhill.

Aside from that, good work.
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [20 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SaiyaSith
Review:
Very good one-shot. Nice story, I liked it. Happy writing!
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sadie
Review:
Wow, very nicely done! Thanks so much for the share. There's potentially so much more to Dawn's Keyness...thanks for the window!
Review By [Sadie] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Cool story. Just very cool.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
Bravo! super fun, though super fast...
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
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Really very clever. I loved the parallel between Buffy diving onto the bed and swan diving off of the tower (whether it was intentional or not). And you have House's voice down perfectly.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TarnishedGold
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::smiles:: I love it. You have House down perfectly... Keep up the good work.
Gold
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [15 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
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You've really got me interested in what happened that could explain this particular story. I have some ideas, but I'm waiting for you to follow this one up. Very well done, and I watched the rerun of this episode just last week, so it has a very new and very fresh perspective.

Write fast please.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [15 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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