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Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
More soon please. I want to see Buffy's reaction to Xander's disappearance and reappearance.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from JonnyNapalm
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You've got great material here. I'm loving the brief connections between the standard DCU and the one that you shaped to better fit with the Jossverses darker tone. Hope that your muse is kind and your train of thought well traveled. Great work. Keep it up.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from Blackguard
Review:
Absolutely loving this series so far, hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Should have had a part out several months ago, but RL is being evil.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [21 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from PhilH
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I was rereading this story and found it had a new chapter! Thanks for updating it!

I liked it, especially Xander saying the CIA had nothing on Lois Lane. :)

It would have been nice to see more of the first meeting of Xander and Martha and Jonathan, perhaps as a flashback later?

Hope to see even more of this soon.

Phil
Review By [PhilH] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from KingOfCretins
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I’ve just finished reading the series through again and loved it.

One thing came to mind from the previous story; if Buffy is going to be helping the League officially even if it is just occasionally it might be best if she had some form of outfit to keep her identity secret perhaps something from the Batclan for extra protection as Slayers don’t have much protection from modern weapons. Just a thought.

Great stuff please write more.
Review By [KingOfCretins] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from Elleria
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So happy to see an update. Love this story.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from Micah
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I'm glad you're going to continue this, I really liked this story and series. There are so many DC heroes that you could integrate, I'm anxious to see where this goes. And the plot is one of the best I've read in a while.
Review By [Micah] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from Bobboky
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cool work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from Dragonelf
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I am glad that you got inspired to update the story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Apple Brown Betty and the author an animé style writer's block smashing mallet::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from CrystalBlaze
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Lovely chapter.

Has Connor thought of getting Raven to develop a collar that can dose Krypto with red sun radiation?

No pain, no harm, just a time out from his powers when he misbehaves..

Also, what dio you think is gonna happen if Xander and Connor find out the poor kid's other genetic donor is Lex?
Comments from author:
This is before Connor died, so he's mostly bluff when it comes to Krypto. Sure he's annoyed that Superman shoved this dog off onto him, but he wouldn't do anything to get rid of the mutt, or seriously train him.

As for Xander finding out just who the human side of Connor is, I'm still debating about it. Either way it won't change the major plot points that I've mapped out for the story, but I don't see Xander being in a position to find out.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
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Hi. Mxy interrupted before Xander could act on it, but I expect he would have taken his laptop for a walk once he knew it could handle vacuum, to the Dark Side of the moon to be more precise. (nice big lunar mass blocking sunspot interference..)

I am impressed by Xander's genre savviness in this part as well. With the outsider's perspective of Xander's truly Strangeluck (such an underrated show, that was) with women, I can confidently say he was, if anything, *understating* what dire fate he would have suffered at the bludgeoning extremities and weapons of all League females.

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
Comments from author:
I'm trying to get the right mix as far as Xander's view on women. In my mind it has become a mix of farmboy respect drilled into him by Clarks memories of Ma and Pa Kent, and the fact that he is now spending his teenage years with a lare group of assertive and somewhat violent women. I worry that it doesn't come across like that, but it seems like I'm at least getting it somewhat right going off of your review.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
I don't mind the shortness, i'm just happy that there is an update. I wouldn't have minded a little more Xander/Lois interaction besides the interrogation, but all in all i'm a happy chappy.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it, hopefully I can get more written soon and continue to make you happy.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from banditobane
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Finally an update. This is one of my favorite series and it is good to see you haven't given up on it hope to see more soon. (On a side note I making profiles for each character I can e-mail you them and you can tell me what you think so far I have Superman, Buffy and part of Batman.)
Comments from author:
Glad you're happy with the update.

As far as the profiles go ahead and send them over if you want.
Review By [banditobane] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from BlueEyedJedi
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Based on the flow Xander's two months in exile will be eventful. I'm surprised Xander did not react to Raven, she is half demon. (Technically she is only 1/4 demon, but why quibble.) In the meantime the world is going to be curious why there is suddenly an extra Superman. Will Xander take out Luthor as a gift for daddy? Till the next chapter, Same Xander time, Same Xander station.

Go with the blessing of Rao.
Comments from author:
This is hero Xander, not seven years of demon hunting Xander. He's taking his ques from the natives, and they seem willing to count Raven on the side of angels. And considering that Xander has interupted the mood between Buffy and Angel a few key times back home, as far as they still know Angelus is nothing more than a distant memory.

As for Xander taking out Lex, don't tempt him. He may not be a hardened demon hunter, but he's having a few issues with the fact that the man that killed his parents and almost killed him is currently POTUS.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Family Gathers" from RedlegIggy
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Huzzah!!! The story lives! One of my favorite series marches forward. Good job, excellent writing, as always. I love the way that you are tying everything together. It seems that the imp sent Xander to Clark for Clark's own good, but what will Xander get out of it?
Comments from author:
Glad you caught that. I like to think of Mxy as a trixter entity, meaning he's a pain in the butt, but his actions help us by forcing the heroes to think with their heads instead of their fists.

As far as what Xander will get out of that, it will be shown in the last part.
Review By [RedlegIggy] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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