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Review of chapter "Secret Origins" from Dragonelf
Review:
Very good story.

::Gives the plot bunny some chocolate carrot cake::

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If you are planning for a year, sow rice;
if you are planning for a decade, plant trees;
if you are planning for a lifetime, educate people.
- Chinese Proverb
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secret Origins" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Wow....
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret Origins" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secret Identities" from Arjai
Review:
The end? I certainly hope not! to many loose ends to tie up, well if you stretch things a bit anyway. I would love to see more, or a sequel even. Thanks for the wonderful read!
Review By [Arjai] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret Identities" from Bobboky
Review:
so is she going to be evil, amoral, or has she been corrupted enough that she now has ideals and maybe even a sense of right and wrong?
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nearly Snatching Defeat from the Jaws of Victory" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [18 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Possession" from Bobboky
Review:
very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Possession" from stonegolem
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I have to say, I am really enjoying this series. The direction you have taken the characters so far is very interesting, and at this point I can't wait to see where it goes. Between that and consistent updates...keep up the good work.
Review By [stonegolem] • Date [17 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Possession" from saberson
Review:
this is a very interesting and cool look at the superman universe. I like it.
Review By [saberson] • Date [17 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Possession" from Valkyrie
Review:
Good stuff.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [17 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Possession" from JasonBarnett
Review:
I still still don't like the fact that Illyria is Kara-Zor-El. Two of all these others, and not even one real Kara. Here's hoping you do something to fix that. I also wonder if they'll let themselves be distracted from the problem at hand after this, or remember there's a little timeline problem to figure out.
Comments from author:
They've actually kind of resolved the timeline issue for now - the Doctor believes it's the result of the kind of deliberate rewriting he knows is endemic to Earth, especially in the Americas. That's not to say they won't do some further investigation to determine exactly why the Powers feel the need for two Kal-Els at this particular juncture - or that there won't be more showing up. But for the moment, he's satisfied that the two timelines are integrated in such a way that there won't be a paradox and the Reapers won't need to show up.

As for Illyria as Supergirl... all I can say for now is don't give up hope if you eventually want to see the *real* Kara Zor-El in the mega crossover.

Edited after story closure - see? Happier now?
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [17 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confrontation" from JoeHundredaire
Review:
There's some homophone and assorted other issues (I'm not even going to touch characterization because to each their own)... and you might want to avoid flooding the site. People tend to review a story once per sitting, and if you upload three chapters in the time between a person's visits, you'll get less reviews and therefore less constructive feedback on your stories. Also, I think the delay might give you time to polish the story itself.
Comments from author:
Ah, but that's part of what I'm posting for! Besides, my chapters do tend to be fairly short, at least compared to some, and I write when I have time and the inspiration for what's going to happen next hits me. I didn't know I was going to strand Illyria on Krypton until I did it, actually - I was halfway thinking I'd have the Doctor spot her on the TARDIS and alert the others by passing psychic paper notes, but it seemed too cutesy in the end.

Anyway, if you'd care to be specific about any of the homophone mixups you spotted, I'd be grateful. I looked through the story again and nothing stood out to me, but it's difficult to proofread one's own text.
Review By [JoeHundredaire] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confrontation" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gathering" from Bobboky
Review:
nifty
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confrontation" from Valkyrie
Review:
Like they'd stand a chance. Fine's a whole lot like the liquid terminator, and with Kryptonian powers, and none of their weaknesses, he'd just keep getting up.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [16 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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