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Review of chapter "Invitations" from TharzZzDunN
Love this story and now I'm moving over to the other part of the series to catch up where it swapped over.

Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You, Robot" from TharzZzDunN
It's really good, I like your characters' sense of humor as well.

Review By [TharzZzDunN] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Invitations" from TinMan
The way you split the chapter between the stories is interesting, but it can be a little bothersome. The links you leave in the relating chapters help rectify that problem, but their is an issue. Some of the earlier links in the older chapters need to be updated. (Going nowhere or to an older version of the linked story.)

When I read the other linked chapters I had to resort to going to your story list between each chapter.

This aside, It adds depth to the stories quite nicely and even conveniently (as long as the links work) and I enjoyed the way it widens the story.

I'm wondering if someone they don't plan on taking ended up hitching a ride to the Haloween party, or if Molly suffers a revelation.

Come to think of it, I believe you mentioned a minor crossover with someone else's story around ch 27 of Trimatry??? I suppose it's food for thought until the specified chapter are posted.

Have a nice day.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reminding me to fix the links; there was originally a Scary Girls: Ultimate Edition but when it caught up with its original, I merged the two. So the links in Trigamy point to story that no longer exists because SG:UE is gone.

I threaded the two because I got sick and tired of going "Hey guys, companion story over here!" and people ignoring it and then whining that they didn't understand what was going on with the Runaways when they showed up and referred to past events that involved interacting with the Trigamy gang. So it was like... fine. You want to read the basic story line? I'm going to MAKE you read both stories.

And yeah, Wise's story mentions that Karen (Xander in the body of Power Girl's evil twin) suffers a bit of a side trip while moving between dimensions. That's going to be her dropping into Trigamy for a bit.
Review By [TinMan] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Invitations" from Meneldur
Nice. Again, don't see much difference, a few words here and there, but it feels much better. And I loved the 'Ginny Weasley' comment.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [25 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cosplay Commotion" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Animated tentacled? Really, I thought you were going clean...;-) The sins of the father will be a weight upon your children's children. Or you can be an emergency back up generator at a hospital, take your pick, kid.

Thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
They're important for an upcoming chapter of Trigamy. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Denied!" from Meneldur
Don't know why, but this feels better than last time, although I can't find a real difference. Maybe because Kit was nicer towards the end? I'm not sure. But in any case, you got the point across, and did so excellently. Wonder how the other chapter will go, where Karolina takes Kit's advice, or whether they'll change. With Xavin having been here, they might, but I'll wait and see.
Comments from author:
It was reformatted a bit to prepare for the Sisterly Six, who will come and (unlike the original) go before Karolina eventually settles on someone who makes her happy.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [17 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Denied!" from Eureka
WOW can you say Bitchy? Between the two of them you need a shovel to get out. But it was needed. Not that last part mind you but that is our girl.
Comments from author:
It's a bit harsher at the end than the original, but I'm setting up to transition a plot line I wrote back in 2006, before Xavin showed up. It took me a while to figure out how to salvage and it required that speed bump, but Karolina ends up (temporarily) happier for it.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goddess of the Dayspring, Am I (Part 4)" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Not being familiar at all with the comics, this is still a nice read. And the girl deserves to get dumped. A lot. Being alien is one thing, being rude and obnoxious another thing entirely. Thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Karolina had a thing for any and every girl that went near her and when she finally had a girl that could be any girl, she didn't want her.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goddess of the Dayspring, Am I (Part 4)" from Cdog
Those girls certainly know how to ease things in when trying to explain stuff.

Looking forward to the next chapter and... date 3?

Scratch what I wrote. You got me flipping between stories I forget which one it was that I was reading. Although it was still a good chapter.
Comments from author:
Well, the problem was that it was a crossover between the two. I went with the interlaced chapters because that way no matter which story you fell into first, it'd be impossible to miss that there was SOMETHING going on between the two.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goddess of the Dayspring, Am I (Part 4)" from feynstrom
Awww, poor Xander, injured in his most assuredly heterosexual masculinity. Let nurse Bekah take care of your boo-boo. ;)
Comments from author:
If that doesn't work, he could always appeal to the one and only Naughty Nurse Kit...
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goddess of the Dayspring, Am I (Part 4)" from Wise
I'd say 'poor Xander,' but it would be totally insincere.
So let's try this one instead: he married three smoking hot girls in Vegas, he's getting more sex than he can deal with on a regular basis (though perhaps not more than he got when he was with Anya), and everything's going fantastically for him, and in that context, I totally sympathize with him feeling awkward and like his masculinity has been threatened by the fact that three attractive women he was lusting after are actually men who've changed their genders by some means.

Poor Xander.
Comments from author:
Actually, no sex in Xander's bedroom. Yet. The girls are being held to a 'no sex till after the pair dates' policy. At least with him. Bekah and Cassie might be eating out for dinner each night.

And you would be the authority on dude-looks-like-a-lady...
Review By [Wise] • Date [24 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You, Robot" from DofEire
Pretty damn cool, Joe. As always. =) You never suck.
Comments from author:
Too bad you can't convince all the people not reviewing of that much.
Review By [DofEire] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goddess of the Dayspring, Am I (Part 2)" from Eureka
One word ROFLMAO
Comments from author:
The arc is - like the rest of Trigamy Part 2 - supposed to be sorta light and fun. There'll be plenty of time to be serious later. :)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goddess of the Dayspring, Am I (Part 2)" from feynstrom
You setting up Katrina for Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas?

Edit: I won't if you won't. And somehow I can never remember he name right.
Comments from author:
Karolina, you mean? Nothing so grand. She's more Apathy and Introversion in Las Vegas. She doesn't even realize Xavin is gone until they're back at La Brea and someone mentions Xavin.

Oh crap. We haven't gotten to the part where Xavin leaves yet.

Pretend I didn't say anything.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goddess of the Dayspring, Am I (Part 2)" from dialNforNinja
Holy crap, you're sure busting this one right out! Even for a rewrite this would be fast, and the hits just keep on comin' with this all-new chapter. You know I'm impressed.
Comments from author:
Well, I actually wrote Scary Girls Chapter 5, Trigamy Chapter 10, and Scary Girls Chapter 6 as one piece. Mostly because I wanted Scary Girls 5 and Trigamy 10 to come out simultaneously. That left me with Scary Girls 6 hanging to post at my leisure. I also have Trigamy 11 and Scary Girls 7 almost done, which covers the next six days (I try to update both every three days but I'm counting them together as one story at the moment, so it's one story or the other every three days) and then this story will get a bit of a hiatus after Scary Girls 8 because Scary Girls 9 and 10 are laying the groundwork for the story to hook back up with Trigamy around Halloween, and I need to get the story closer to that point so I don't end up posting Scary Girls 9 and/or 10 and then needing to retcon it later.
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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