OOOHHHH....interesting. Faith...working at night....in the blood district.... I'm reminded of the "unofficial motto of the Green Berets" "Yea, though I walk through the Valley of the Shadow of Death, I shall fear no evil....for I am the baddest mo....f..ker in the valley."
Now you've REALLY caught my attention. This one is going on the watch list.
Review By [gogreer] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Not Rated
This one lives up to the beginning. Faith's desperation, veiled suggestion of danger in her new job. If your execution is as good as the set-up you will do very well indeed. Plot and plan don't rush, and when the dam breaks the rest of the tale will likely rush from your mind to your fingers in an unimpeded flow. Enjoy the rush I know I do!
Review By [Arjai] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
This was like a movie for the mind. It reminds me of the trailers for Lord of the Rings. You just know your going to like the story. Peter Jackson could have done no better. Well done.
Comments from author:
Wow! That's high praise! Thanks. No pressure then... ;)
Review By [gogreer] • Date [21 Aug 06] • Not Rated
*shivers* Wow...I just got goosebumps. Great start to the story. More please!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Hopefully I'll be able to update on a semi regular basis. Writing is new to me and I'm discovering how fickle muses are (and how annoying real life can be when I want to write...)
Review By [Zagadska] • Date [21 Aug 06] • Not Rated
