A very nice intro for this character, simply love how you write the visuals!

Wispr

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Oh that poor lad!
He just doesn't get the message, don't volunteer, especially if you don't know where you're getting into.
Hope there is more of this guy, I kind of like him, although no pairing up with Buffster, can't stand those. She isn't human material. Although Dawn is...
...and she isn't that much younger. And he seemed kind of sweet (don't tell him I said that), plus the part about being able to talk without hiding anything would get important with her bubbly personality.
Leaving that behind very entertaining story, loved it.
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funny. i bet not only will the guy get the air force job, but he will be assigned to SG-1 as well

SG-2, actually

Liked this lots the ending gave me a good laugh.

Don't know how I missed this first time round.

All the best,
DaveT.

Good fic :)

You should write some more Stargate...you write them really well...

Please?

Love the "Golem of Prague" bits, and 'hee!' to "how dangerous can Cheyenne Mountain be?"! Love getting more back-story on this character.

Nice fic with a good blend of action and setup and an interesting character to follow. Enjoyable as ever, Don.

The crossover took some times to take, but it was otherwise worth it. Great work. The other part of the series explains more, though. :-)

Nice - I presume that this is after Misunderstandings but before TBoNTB?

Glad you went with the proper way of killing a golem, all the legends say they're pretty much unstoppable otherwise. Slice and dice etc. certainly won't work, nor will bullets, unless you hit exactly the right target.

Lol! Loved the last line. Nice story with good action and characters. And the humor was very Buffish also.

You'd think he'd have learned not to think that. *grin*