Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Listener
This story was really enjoyable. A little too talky in places, and I kept seeing the Smallville actors instead of the L&C ones, but I still liked it. I do think Illyria's ploy was a bit too unsubtle, but it was nice to see that Clark was right.
Review By [Listener
] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LetsRandom
I really enjoyed this story and hope there is indeed a sequel in the works
Review By [LetsRandom
] • Date [25 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwoBlackDragons
Could you please break this up into smaller chapters?
Review By [TwoBlackDragons
] • Date [5 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darknight
Oh I loved this story. Is this going to have a sequel? I hope so, because this story was awesome. I love that you have Spike and Buffy as a paring.There are just not enough crossover stories with my favorite pairing in it.
Review By [darknight
] • Date [22 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpacedCadet
...er..um..what happened to the sequels ?
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AmarinRose
Spike talking down Illyria was...inspired. And I loved the Buffy/Spike reuniting scene. The ending was also rather funny; can't wait to read the sequel!
Review By [AmarinRose
] • Date [7 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
I really hope you will be inspired soon to write a sequel to this story.
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [22 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PrincessTai
Sequel, sequel, sequel! Please, please, PLEEEEAAAAASE!
Ohhhh I can't wait! I so enjoyed this story. I loved Bill and Slayer Lois.
And my Spikey. Willow hugged him. The whole Illyria thing, that was so without the drama but I figured it would be. Like you had her say, humans grow on her *bg*
So about that sequel?
Review By [PrincessTai
] • Date [13 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Really enjoyable! I'm a sucker for a Spuffy ending, always, and you nearly broke my heart with the Slayer-world's versions of Lois and Clark, who'd had so many hard breaks. Love Spike as the deus ex machina bringing everybody together and talking Illyria out of letting grief lead her to create more grief.
Only downside was the fact that somehow it never came out that the reason Angel and Company didn't ask for Slayer help in their final battle might've been because they'd been given the brush-off by Andrew and Giles on previous occasions. Somehow, it seems that Giles has once again been holding out on Buffy, supposedly for her own good, and he really need to be broken of that bad habit.
I hope you do, someday, write the sequel about Slayers et al in the Lois & Clark 'verse, 'cause I'd love to read it.
[btw, there are a few typos, such as referring to Smallville accidentally as Sunnydale in chapter 4, and Clark thinking about how revealing his secret to the Slayers wouldn't be fair to "Bill" about a chapter or more before we found out that Clark's alternate in that universe was called "Bill", so I was puzzling for some time over who the heck Clark meant.]
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [28 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MetropolisRising
Nice throughout! I like the harder edge that you gave everything in the Buffyverse, swearing and what not. Clearly imagined version of a Buffy style Metropolis and an interesting take on what happens to a kryptonian in the Buffy-verse...which I've been trying to figure out myself. Thanks for this and I hope that the fact that this fic seems to have flown under the radar for most people doesn't scare you away from writing a sequel at some point, not with the great writing style that you have!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have a sequel outlined and the first three chapters written in rough draft. I need to make time to finish it!
Review By [MetropolisRising
] • Date [26 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Great work, you are quite the gifted writer. Too bad you like Spike that much. Maybe i'll change mind when i rewatch the show.
Review By [arkeus
] • Date [6 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NumberFive
Great story. you should post it at spuffy sites like the bloodshedverse and Spuffy Realm. I liked Dawn's 'But I've got Finals'... Can't wait for more.
Review By [NumberFive
] • Date [26 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoAnneStorm
Oh... Very nice. I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel.
Review By [JoAnneStorm
] • Date [25 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Very nice.Looking forward to the sequal.
Review By [SamDragon
] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
I liked this a lot more than I thought I would. 1996 Ethan Rayne in the L&C dimension is a bit of a fright, to be sure. Thanks for having a full story beat and such a clear "to be continued" element.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [24 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]