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Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from skychan
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I have to say, the final bit about having sex with someone they aren't married to makes this story.
Comments from author:
Hey, Elsa comes from an obviously Christianized era in Scandinavian history. They aren't really big fans of premarital sex.
Review By [skychan] • Date [25 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from Meneldur
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Oh, wonderful. I always enjoy your Vegas fics, but this one was especially enjoyable, for the characters used. Willow was of course classic, though I have to wonder how she managed such powerful magic drunk... still, it was apparently very beneficial for her, wasn't it?

Merida and Elsa were hilarious together. I loved how Elsa took control pretty quickly, and how she knew what questions to ask...

Nice touch with the inscription, I wonder where Willow found somebody to engrave it given how drunk they must have been and the amount of magic used... Maybe she made it with magic? A very good verse to have used, and surprisingly fitting given how gender neutral it was, though in truth it is said by a female to a male...

Elsa's final reaction was quite amusing. I have to admit I'd love to see more of where this goes. Willow in Vegas fics (at least with females) are rather rare, at least as far as I've seen... in any case, thanks for this, and happy international day of femslash (if a bit belated).

EDIT: Oh, I know many people exchange rings these days, and even here in Israel religious men often wear rings (though it's usually not given during the actual ceremony). I was commenting on the verse, rather - that it's fitting because it's gender neutral (unlike many verses), even if in The Song of Songs (the original context) a woman is saying it to a man. Which makes it all the more fitting for a traditional wedding, I suppose...
Comments from author:
I thought you of all people would recognize the rings, but I didn't take into account that you're in pretty much THE bastion of traditional Judaism. With the rise of gender equality in Western nations, you'll occasionally see Jewish weddings where they defy tradition and the wife gives the husband a ring too. That phrase is said aloud as she places the ring on his finger, and accordingly is sometimes inscribed on the ring as well. So I'm betting that jewelers in Vegas either stock the rings or can inscribe it quickly for Jewish couples who want to get married in Sin City.

Things you learn when you look up wedding ring customs for a picture Lexi is drawing...
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from Wise
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I lolled.
Comments from author:
I also lol'd.
Review By [Wise] • Date [20 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from Jazzibear
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What fun! Quite charming as well. I, too, would very much like to know what happens next. It would make a very interesting ménage à trois, wouldn’t it?
Comments from author:
Let's just hope Anna isn't out there somewhere waiting to hit Willow with a guitar. Or Merida, for that matter.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [20 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from MistofRainbows
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Loved the story, I liked Elsa's comments about marriage and sleeping with people... it was perfect.
Comments from author:
She's got a point: she's no scarlet woman.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from (Current Donor)Truthmaker
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Well if you're going to bring your fantasies to life, aim high!

Thanks for sharing this.
Comments from author:
I'm surprised she didn't bring Rapunzel along too. She's also cute.

...also known as "I was pondering it but the first draft was too busy so I ditched a princess".
Review By [(Current Donor)Truthmaker] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from raxadian
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Well, at least Willow won't be alone.
Comments from author:
Yeah. Although this means there's no chance of reconciling with Kennedy.

"Sorry, sweetie, but I'm seeing somebody elsa."
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from Chan
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As always it's interesting to read what wild times you choose to write for vegas trips if there happens to be more I would be interested in seeing it.
Comments from author:
I might. Or I might do a bunch of "Scoobies woke up with" ficlets. Not sure yet. They're kinda fun.
Review By [Chan] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from Zarthrax
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I would like to see this continue almost as much as the Xander wakes up married to most of the Young Avengers one, which is rather kinda a lot....lol
Comments from author:
I was poking around my hard drive the other day cleaning things up and found like, eight different versions of that fic. At least three different solo wife versions, two different groups...
Review By [Zarthrax] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from dcarson
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Willow is bad about assuming that she is right so she probably won't investigate, but did she create them from magic based on the movies or did she grab them from a dimension that inspired the writers. If she grabbed them she really should see if they can return.
Comments from author:
Well, the bigger problem would be that if she could marry them (because they do some cursory identification checking to issue the license), she's somehow managed to insert them into the real world à la Dawn.
Review By [dcarson] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from ChefJackButler
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Just FYI, the Kazui's haven't owned Buffy since 2010.

EDIT: Warner Brothers now owns the property outright. Which means that in about another 5 years we'll start seeing wholesale remake noises, not just the occasional squeaks we're hearing now.
Comments from author:
And Whedon never owned it or anything related to it, but people still disclaim him. Who picked up ownership?

EDIT: I'll probably edit the disclaimers when I merge this down into my FFA story, then.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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That was an awesome last line. *laughs* And a very fun concept. Thank you for sharing this.
Comments from author:
Not a problem. ^_^
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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Nice use of the Hebrew inscription there for Willow. I appreciate that level of authenticity from you, always.
Comments from author:
Found it the other day when I was doing wedding ring research for one of Lexi's drawings. Jewish women seldom give men rings (at least during the ceremony) but when it occurs, that's the phrase that's said aloud and therefore sometimes inscribed on the ring. Given it's very gender neutral, I thought it might be appropriate for lesbian rings.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from Harry
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I haven't seen Frozen, so I can't really say much about them. But Red is going to have some SERIOUS explaining to people about how she ended up in a polygamous lesbian relationship!
Review By [Harry] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You & Me & Her & the Bottle Makes 4 (Willow/f/f)" from jormunguard
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Excellent story. Would love to see a follow up, just to see the reactions of the others.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [19 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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