Review of chapter "The Justicar (Faith/Samara)" from laoshi
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Now I have to reread Perfection.
It will be such a chore I’m sure.
I’ve never played Mass Effect have no idea what’s going on but I’m sure I’ll follow enough things to enjoy it.
Let’s recruit the blue space skank. That’s a Lehane idea if I ever heard one. Faith wants Morinth to serve under her huh?
The romance brings a tear to my eye. I’m sure one day their bluish grandchildren will gather round the fire to hear the tale of how grandmother and grandmum got together. Providing of course they haven’t made a pack to kill them as well, in which case their would probably be considerably more running and hiding involved.
Comments from author:
Sadly, Morinth can't procreate. That's part of her being what she is entails. Asari reproduce via 'melding'; the entire species is asexual but looks female, and they join with their preferred partners (of any gender or species) to use their DNA as a randomizer to keep Asari DNA from stagnating. The Asari 'mother' then gives birth to the child which is mostly Asari, but we've seen some scattered instances of the 'father' influencing the offspring as well.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Justicar (Faith/Samara)" from scottm
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Great story. I often don't review because I don't usually have a lot to say. But I like reading your writing. What happened to the 12 for 12 you did? I only read one. Are you not posting all the new stories on your author page now? Keep up the wonderful writing!
Comments from author:
I left them up for a week or so before squishing them into a few other story collections; I don't like having a massively bloated account and so I tend to condense stuff into collections. Perfection (prequel to this) is one, Split Banana is another (still on my author page), and the rest are scattered over Lunalettes and Joe's FFA Collection.
Review of chapter "The Justicar (Faith/Samara)" from Chikageko
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Interesting, forget sheppard, have faith. Buffy certianly couldn't do it, though she's a bit better at the won't stay dead thing. Out of curisoity though, where did faith pick up biotics? To the best of my knowledge you had to be born with those. Though magic mascurading as biotics would certianly make sense, the slayer is a host demon after all and supposed to be powerful as all hell.
Comments from author:
Well, if you read the preceding story, Faith replaced Shepard by way of some sort of vengeance demon wish (Malice is a vengeance demon she interacts with in 'Go Ask Malice') and they introduced ways of inducing biotics after birth in-universe as a way of making it canon that Shepard COULD be a biotic or could NOT be a biotic depending on your choices. :)
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Justicar (Faith/Samara)" from EroSlackerMicha
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you can't leave it at that!
this has the potential to be a great multi-part story. this was a teaser. come on, add more chapters to this please.
Comments from author:
I'm never sure whether or not I'll do more of my little ideas, so I mark them as completed one-shots so that if I do manage a "sequel", you're pleasantly surprised. I mean, "Perfection" was meant to be it for a Faith-in-ME2 idea and then this popped up. Oops.
Review of chapter "The Justicar (Faith/Samara)" from Cmiller
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That was great. I kinda want to see Faith and Kasumi interact. Also kinda want to see the VS and Liara's reactions to Faith.
Comments from author:
Kasumi and Faith. The galaxy will never be the same.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [22 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Justicar (Faith/Samara)" from Thyatira
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Meat Shield! Ah that takes me back to the days of Bioware's Neverwinter Nights. I played a rogue of course and we called the warriors what else but meat shields. Heh. And have you noticed that most of the girls who play ME are nuts over Garrus? I like him too but I wouldn't fuck him. Maybe if it was a choice between Garrus and Mr. No Personality Jacob. It just makes me wonder what Faith's reaction to the idea might be.
Comments from author:
I'm tempted to do one with Faith pointing out the obvious... that whole mono/dextro thing they keep bringing up? In real world science, something as minor as transferred saliva might be fatally poisonous between the two. Tali and Garrus would both be off-limits to a human, and it's not because Tali is a quarian with a compromised immune system.
Review By [Thyatira] • Date [22 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Black Symphony (Faith/Flora Carrow/Hestia Carrow)" from feynstrom
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Not really liking it. It's not any particular element, but rather the whole scene setup I don't care for.
So just giving a review_count++
Comments from author:
So... "there's nothing I actually don't like, I just don't like it"? O_o
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunrise Over Maridun (Dawn/Ahsoka Tano)" from Chikageko
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WWWeeeeelllllll...... now..... Dawn huh? Good ficlet, i honestly liked it, just one question. If it's Dawn and she's moving around through time space and dimentions as she changes lives, why isn't she a GREEN twilek?
Edit: huh, somehow I came off thinking you'd made her blue...
Comments from author:
"Zora rose to her feet, the bright green Twi'lek twisting back and forth to stretch out her body before offering Ahsoka a hand up off the ground."
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scream My Name (Faith/Zatanna Zatara)" from Jarvey
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I'll be in my bunk...
Comments from author:
Faith needs fishnets...
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Black Symphony (Faith/Flora Carrow/Hestia Carrow)" from BaileyMatutine
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Poor Trixie.
Comments from author:
Poor grass at Shell Cottage.
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scream My Name (Faith/Zatanna Zatara)" from BaileyMatutine
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Reviews are for the weak.
Comments from author:
I thought that was penguins?
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Perfection (Faith/Miranda Lawson)" from BaileyMatutine
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I'm just sorta adding reviews to all of your stories.
I figured you'd appreciate the spam.
Comments from author:
I wonder how bad people would hurt me on SB if I posted this.
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunrise Over Maridun (Dawn/Ahsoka Tano)" from BaileyMatutine
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You should add these all to a series.
Comments from author:
They're gonna get spread around. Some are merging into my FFA collection, others into Lunalettes, et cetera.
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sunrise Over Maridun (Dawn/Ahsoka Tano)" from Thyatira
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I always like your Dawn. I'm not too hot on clone wars, gave that up soon into it, but I enjoyed this.
Comments from author:
This is about halfway into S1, I think. I borrowed the episode off Lexi's iPad to scratch something together using.
Review By [Thyatira] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Perfection (Faith/Miranda Lawson)" from Thyatira
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Mass Effect! I do love me some Mass Effect. I'm even writing a crossover fanfic myself in that universe, though I'm finding myself somewhat lacking in describing the ship to ship combat. I'd love to see you try your hand at something like that. And Miranda comes across perfectly. Spot on. And Faith/Kasumi hijinks? The mind boggles.
Comments from author:
I actually stayed out of that because until now, we've seen minimal ship-to-ship combat and don't really have a good sense for what the weaponry of the Citadel races can do. After seeing some of the visuals in the ME3 demo tonight, it looks like that might change (for the better) come March 6th.
Review By [Thyatira] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]