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Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from Dragan
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Hmm the upcoming BBQ looks to be the perfect spot for Dawn to accidentally let the Buffy out of the bag. :)

Perhaps with Scooby crash-age?
Review By [Dragan] • Date [19 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from squeegybug
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Dawn's behavior seems to be getting more childish as she goes on. I fully expect Daniel to say, 'Is that all?' When she FINALLY reveals that Buffy is back from the dead, having done it like, three times now, himself. And since they know that Willow is able to hack their system with impunity, if not the blessing, of the President, she can find out ...anything she wants to know. Well, anything that Jack's boring watered-down painfully written reports will tell them, anyway.
I am really tennis matching back and forth between who would be the most inappropriate parental material between the kids of BtVS and adults of SG-1. They all have horribly dangerous jobs. They could disappear without a trace at anytime and no explanation could be found. They all deal with bad things that go bump, either in the night, or the void, that defy normal human explanation. And Daniel gets kidnapped with the same frequency that Dawn does, that must be where she got it. I keep waiting for Tuesday to come around and something to kidnap Dawn or Daniel. Or both at once...
I can't wait for Cassie to have her magnet-twirling melt down in front of Dawn. Or Dawn to have a green glowy melt down in front of Sam, take your pick. Someone is going to end up in the Infirmary with electrodes stuck to them, either way. They might not NEED Nirrti if they have access to Willow, Giles, Tara, or Dawn. And Glory might have been much easier to deal with if you just waited til she was Ben and then shove her through the wormhole into a singularity.
Review By [squeegybug] • Date [10 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Understanding" from squeegybug
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I had forgotten about her klepto. problem. I don't think that I would be nearly as understanding in Daniel's shoes, but explaining why she did it helped, a little anyway. Other that that, she's acting like she's four in the pouting and such department. And I can't believe that Gen. Hammond didn't bust over the trace. I would think that they'd be on Willow's porch the next day, confiscating all her computer equipment under HomeLand Security. But this is all good, very nice story so far.
Review By [squeegybug] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Right Answer" from squeegybug
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This is really good. I always hated the way that Dawn always came across as such a total brat. This makes her seem less so, more like she was in that one episode where they thought that she might be the next Potential, because she came from Buffy. And I still don't get why that didn't happen, BTW. Anyway. I can't wait until they get to the fact that both she and Daniel prob. speak the same half dozen languages. That's only ONE of the weird things she will have to explain...
Review By [squeegybug] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from dreameralways
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Please come back to this. I really want an ending.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [14 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from MountainKing
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Not the first time I've reviewed, and hopefully not the last, I just wanted to ad my voice to the chorus of "Please Update"

This is not the only "Dawn's Real Family" story I've read but it is the one I do come back to. You've got a lot of the characters just right, their interactions down and even their hopes and fears. I understand how difficult that is to do so I really would like to congratulate you on a job well done. It is a great shame that you've not come back to this story in, what, three years now? There is still a great deal of potential, from a disaster at Jack's cabin (everything from Vampire attack to Dawn recognising Teal'c's emblem) to Spike turning up to chew Dawn out about telling Buffy.

Another idea could be that Dawn breaks down and tells one of the gang, not Daniel, the truth about herself. Janet could run a DNA test and then all sorts of hijinks could ensue. The fact is there are just so many ways for this story to go, and its the next few chapters that decide just how and in what direction it will end up in.

In a very real sense you've stopped right at the end of the first act, you've set up the status quo, Dawn living with Daniel, and we're on the brink of the second. The point where the crap hits the fan.

If you have given up and abandoned this story then could you please post a short postscript, letting everyone know . Otherwise I and a lot of other people look forward to your next chapter, whenever you can post it.

Thomas
AKA Mountain King
Review By [MountainKing] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from SamuraiSky
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Excellent story! Please please please continue it!?
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from AndreaMaine
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Like several of your readers I loved this story and I would like to see where you take it. I find it a good place to begin after the whole Glory fiasco. I think when they learn Dawn is really a kind of clone of Buffy that they will at first think Loki's been at it again, but I think when that gets out Daniel will still like Dawn. After all they can still see her as Buffy's sister though in fact she is more the Slayer's daughter and in the case of this timeline Daniel's granddaughter.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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And another year and another read through and still hoping very much that this will be continued. It is too awesome not to be. I want Buffy to meet Daniel, dag nabbit!
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from Kateydidnt
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Hi! Just popping in and poking this story. I really do love it and I hope you decide to continue it one day!
Review By [Kateydidnt] • Date [24 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from Starfox
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A great story - touching, moving, and without characters acting out of character, all fits. I do hope you will update again sometime.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [11 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from NPetrenko
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Great story. More please!
Review By [NPetrenko] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from bjhWaikato
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PLEASE!!! Come back and continue, this a very good story. The writing is great and It would be a shame to leave this unfinished
Review By [bjhWaikato] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from Berserkerzeroone
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Please, please, please, please, PLEASE!!! Come back and continue this story, because you cut off at the "Holy crap, are you sure SHE'S not your daughter?" part of the story, because it's already been pointed out to him. And one can only hope that Buffy gate crashes the party and the whole, "But you're dead... I saw your grave... What's going on Dawn...?".

Hopefully I've just sparked the imagination furnace and relit the fire that drove this story into existence.

*If you have to shoot me... please shoot me from a cannon and into a net!*
Review By [Berserkerzeroone] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from chrysanthemum
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Awesome, hilarious story. I hope you come back to it!
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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