Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from dreameralways
Please come back to this. I really want an ending.
Review By [dreameralways
] • Date [14 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from MountainKing
Not the first time I've reviewed, and hopefully not the last, I just wanted to ad my voice to the chorus of "Please Update"
This is not the only "Dawn's Real Family" story I've read but it is the one I do come back to. You've got a lot of the characters just right, their interactions down and even their hopes and fears. I understand how difficult that is to do so I really would like to congratulate you on a job well done. It is a great shame that you've not come back to this story in, what, three years now? There is still a great deal of potential, from a disaster at Jack's cabin (everything from Vampire attack to Dawn recognising Teal'c's emblem) to Spike turning up to chew Dawn out about telling Buffy.
Another idea could be that Dawn breaks down and tells one of the gang, not Daniel, the truth about herself. Janet could run a DNA test and then all sorts of hijinks could ensue. The fact is there are just so many ways for this story to go, and its the next few chapters that decide just how and in what direction it will end up in.
In a very real sense you've stopped right at the end of the first act, you've set up the status quo, Dawn living with Daniel, and we're on the brink of the second. The point where the crap hits the fan.
If you have given up and abandoned this story then could you please post a short postscript, letting everyone know . Otherwise I and a lot of other people look forward to your next chapter, whenever you can post it.
AKA Mountain King
Review By [MountainKing
] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from SamuraiSky
Excellent story! Please please please continue it!?
Review By [SamuraiSky
] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from AndreaMaine
Like several of your readers I loved this story and I would like to see where you take it. I find it a good place to begin after the whole Glory fiasco. I think when they learn Dawn is really a kind of clone of Buffy that they will at first think Loki's been at it again, but I think when that gets out Daniel will still like Dawn. After all they can still see her as Buffy's sister though in fact she is more the Slayer's daughter and in the case of this timeline Daniel's granddaughter.
Review By [AndreaMaine
] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from vidicon
And another year and another read through and still hoping very much that this will be continued. It is too awesome not to be. I want Buffy to meet Daniel, dag nabbit!
Review By [vidicon
] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from Kateydidnt
Hi! Just popping in and poking this story. I really do love it and I hope you decide to continue it one day!
Review By [Kateydidnt
] • Date [24 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from Starfox
A great story - touching, moving, and without characters acting out of character, all fits. I do hope you will update again sometime.
Review By [Starfox
] • Date [11 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from NPetrenko
Great story. More please!
Review By [NPetrenko
] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from bjhWaikato
PLEASE!!! Come back and continue, this a very good story. The writing is great and It would be a shame to leave this unfinished
Review By [bjhWaikato
] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from Berserkerzeroone
Please, please, please, please, PLEASE!!! Come back and continue this story, because you cut off at the "Holy crap, are you sure SHE'S not your daughter?" part of the story, because it's already been pointed out to him. And one can only hope that Buffy gate crashes the party and the whole, "But you're dead... I saw your grave... What's going on Dawn...?".
Hopefully I've just sparked the imagination furnace and relit the fire that drove this story into existence.
*If you have to shoot me... please shoot me from a cannon and into a net!*
Review By [Berserkerzeroone
] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from chrysanthemum
Awesome, hilarious story. I hope you come back to it!
Review By [chrysanthemum
] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from SpacedCadet
STILL waiting for an update.
This story is too good to be allowed to fade away unfinished!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from MercyJones
2 years... PLEASE UPDATE!!!! I still think about this story, wondering what's gonna happen next!!! You're evil and torturous and an excellent writer! If you're gonna be evil and torturous, do it with your excellent writing and not lack of it!
Review By [MercyJones
] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from Netchka
Just read this again after a couple years. Still love it. Can't wait for more.
Review By [Netchka
] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Relatively Speaking" from jebbypal
Very cute. REally enjoyed it thus far.
Review By [jebbypal
] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]