Please keeping writing. I love this story!!!!! I would love more please!!!!

hey you updated!!!!!!! i'm loving this fic and glad you kept up with it1!!

I continue to enjoy your intriguing story. Obviously Dawn doesn't find her way home, but I look forward to finding out her life in the X-Men's universe. I also really want to see her find out what happened to her memory. Nice job with everyones' personalities.

Well written and interesting... I hope to read more.

*does happy dance of joy* Thanks for updating this. :) It's still one of my favorite stories on the site.

Did I miss something or did Dawn have a broken leg in the last chapter, but now is walking?

Umm...you missed me not rereading carefully enough when I went back to a story I haven't touched in a couple of years. Thanks for pointing that out. I'm going to go work on it now.

The Tower, and the ending of the Glory Arc?

It's an honest thought: What if Dawn (or Buffy) had honestly gone THROUGH the portal to elsewhere, thus not living in that world anymore and satisfying the spell?

(another option would be Faith showing and going through for real or dying, but one of the Mistaken Identity drabbles has that handled, I think)

You haven't said if Dawn remembers Glory and the Tower. I can make a argument that she did, but that something else had caused this traumatic amnesia. Put simply, since it's just shy of three years later, if the time passes at equal speeds, the Potential Slayers just got awakened, and many promptly died.

If Dawn is a Summers by body yet remains the Child of the Slayers, having then losing that many new parents in the spiritual sense can create a VERY strong shock.

Good stuff

More please ^^

hmmm... i'm really intregued by this fic so far... really good premise, followed up by brilliant characterisation.

the plot sounds good and all in all it's a really enticing fic... can't wait to see more of this...

M

Very nice story I for one if you are inclinded would like to see and update to it.

She fell from the sky
She fell very far
And Cleveland, she says,
Is the name of her star!

I'm looking forward to more of this!

YAY! Another yummy chapter...Hopefully you'll update this sometime in the near future.

Cheers,
MJ

oh man, well you have to tell us why Dawn's memory got wiped, and why they can't send her back and stuff, please? ;)

I love this story and immediately stopped working to read it. :) It reduces me to this level: Plz up8 soon....this totally roxor!!11!!!

Look what you made me do. You made me a ff.net reviewer! You should feel special since this story basically sparked the idea for the whole COA thing. I haven't yet decided if this is good special or bad special.