Review of chapter "Northern Dawn" from Elleria
Very good story.
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [9 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Northern Dawn" from RevDorothyL
So, does Dawn get to be flower girl at the wedding, at least?
Seriously, though, I'm loving the combo of bratty Dawn and snarky Ray the Second.
Oh, and funniest bit, hands down, was that whole 'something in my eye' bit: "...Shut up. That’s my story, and I’m sticking to it, no matter what Ben says." Perfect Kowalski moment!
Comments from author:
She's pushing to be Ray's maid of honor, but he's objecting rather vehemently to the notion that he's the bride of the wedding. If he weren't so distracted at the moment, he would have already gotten her back for that wisecrack and a few others she's made.
They really are the perfect match in a lot of ways.
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [27 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Northern Dawn" from acs
Poor Dawn. Good story though.
Am I correct in thinking Buffy assumed they were going to be able to re-age Dawn and was surprised that they couldn't ? I would have thought Willow or Giles would have told her that before 'now'. And that her relief at Dawn staying in Tuktoyaktuk had a lot to do with the Xander situation? Or am I reading too much into it?
And I'm wondering what happened to Ethan (who I don't think was ever really "Evil".) Lots of tantalizing little back-story tidbits. Are you going to be filling out the back-story or is the focus only going to be on where BtVS universe events intersect with Ray and Benton (Did Ray refer to him as Ben, Benton or Fraser in the series? I don't think I remember enough episodes to know that...)
Comments from author:
They were all hoping to be able to get Dawn back to her correct age, but there was no way for them to know if it would work until after they broke Amy's spell. As for Buffy's relief, the reason for that will be covered in a future story, but to partially answer your question, Xander is one reason, but not the main reason.
The focus of the stories is/will be primarily on Ray, Fraser and Dawn, with other BtVS and dS characters showing up in guest spots. In the series, Ray called Fraser by his last name or just "Frase." I switched it to Ben as part of establishing them as a pair.
Review By [acs
] • Date [27 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]