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Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I'm not nearly as much into Star Wars as you obviously are but I'm really enjoying this.

Looking foreward to more!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [26 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from Jobi
Review:
Wow, Cordy takes the galaxy by storm... scary and highly amusing. I look forward to the rest of this as it comes forth.
Review By [Jobi] • Date [3 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from Elissiaro
Review:
I really like this!

So... Um... Hope you keep writing!

Bye!
Review By [Elissiaro] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
10.

ohaa an army of Cordy's.....the poor Galaxy....


11.

hmm sound like a paradise world.....or not :)

12.

hmm I wonder where you will go from here now that Cordy met Sidious
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sexual Healer" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
5.

a wet Cordila in white??? Those lucky clones :)

6.
a whole army of Cordy clones?????? The galaxy will burn :)
but some how I have problems with thing Cordy would let herself be copied.

7.

nice meeting with Padme

8.

ahh Cordy corrupting more Jedi and finally she has her own blades :)

9.

Nice talk with Brriss and now she starts as a nurse....lol
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Offer You Can Refuse" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1.
Joe...you are evil......I hope you know that.....putting Cordelia onto the Jedi Coucil?
I'm sure that is illegal somewhere :)

2.

sound like an interesting training program Cordy's girl came up with.

3.
poor Anakin...either Cordy will drive some common sense into him or to the dark side even faster than in canon :)

4.

ahh good Cordy took him on.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from adamjb
Review:
I enjoyed what you have written of this story.

My only major gripe is the creation of Cordelia's clones. It's not something I think she would agree with. The mind copy is especially bad. Cordelia is no longer unique, and as you have shown, she is easily mistaken for one of her many clones.

One thing that I like about this story more than some of your others is that Cordelia isn't surrounded by her clique. I find Cordelia to be a much stronger, more intelligent character when she is free of their influence.

I hope you choose to continue this story, preferably in the not-so-distant future. Any chance of that happening?
Comments from author:
I'm working forward still to correct some issues with the older chapters as I uncover new data and more material is added to the EU. As for Cordelia's mindset, what's a unique face compared to incredible money and power?
Review By [adamjb] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from Thyatira
Review:
This story is, of course, awesome. I could never write a Star Wars story though. The canon backstory is just too mindbogglingly massive and I'm man enough to admit that I'm just not geek enough to manage it. Good job on you then. I couldn't get into the Clone Wars cartoon. I tried, but I found it boring. Good job at making it not boring. Lesbians make everything better! I love your OC Hiskari by the way. She's perfect. And your Yoda is quite well done, as well as the Cordy-clones which are hilarious. Thanks very much for the story!
Review By [Thyatira] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mommy Knows Best" from laoshi
Review:
Is the CGI series worth watching or should I just read a quick episode synopsis on the web?

We get your references Cordelia.

Ooh the clones might get force powers? Awesome.

Yes it is very mean. But I won’t hold it against you if you make with the abject grovelling. No that’s regular grovelling. Be abjecter.

Bifurcating? Doesn’t that mean she’d get two blades?

Please tell me you’re planning on giving us a picture of the Queen C’s nose art.

Are you sure Cordelia couldn’t be evil? With a clone army behind her I’m sure she has a fine career in galactic warlordism ahead of her.

Great Chapter thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
In canon, the bifurcating pulse essentially sends power through two different lightsaber crystals so that as water floods the blade and extinguishes it, there's already another blade being generated and the saber never actually goes out. It generates an odd rippling look when used. In open air, things look normal.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from Thedruid
Review:
Haven't you re-written this same chapter about 4 times now? I keep getting update notices but all I never see this progress beyond this.
Comments from author:
That might be because you ignore the giant bold note at the top with a link in it? I've been adding chapters into the story to incorporate material from the CGI series that predates the Battle of Rendili, meaning it takes place before this chapter and... wait for it... wait for it... goes before it when the chapters are arranged linearly.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy Knows Best" from Arekanderu
Review:
Nice! It's great to see more background into the Cordylegions and it's always great to see them :)
Comments from author:
I'm doing at least one more chapter based on the Second Battle of Kamino. Maybe a third.
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from (Recent Donor)betascud
Review:
Ha! I can't believe I didn't find this earlier. Great story, one of your better ones actually... Just wait till Cordy realizes that with the whole Jedi thing she became buffy-like, not just her clones willow-like...
Comments from author:
She's not actually too Buffy-like. Maybe more Faith-like than anything else.
Review By [(Recent Donor)betascud] • Date [29 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from GundumM
Review:
i found it entertaining and somewhat amusing
Comments from author:
I try. ^_^
Review By [GundumM] • Date [29 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Trouble, You Are" from Zyanadryn
Review:
I hope you write a sequel... love all of the cordelianess..esses???
Comments from author:
There will be more chapters for this backdated into the existing story, and then probably a sequel too.
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kinda Sorta Phallic, Aren't They?" from seriouser
Review:
When I saw the title of the story I thought it was about Cordelia-dinosaur hybrid. Fortunately I was wrong. Nicely done.
Comments from author:
A Cordilociraptor might be awesome too...
Review By [seriouser] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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