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Review of chapter "Who am I??" from Martin
Review:
This whole story is a disjointed mess.
Comments from author:
Sorry you feel that way - unfortunately the story reflected issues in my personal life at the time which is why it was picked up and put down and picked up again and then finished to try to get the monkey off my back. As with everything, you are entitled to your opinion.
Review By [Martin] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I FELT A LITTLE LIKE A DYING CLOWN" from DragonBard
Review:
What about Xander or Tara?
Comments from author:
Sorry for the delay in replying to you regarding this. As the story was the product of my imagination, characters from the show, situations or events may not happen, nor happen in the way they should purely from a point of view of developing the plot as I think it should be - not always succeessfully.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [17 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who am I??" from Musicalife
Review:
I have to agree with Cutie Pie, that wasn't an ending; it would have been better if you read through the earlier chapters and provided closure, this says 'sequel coming' but you stated that 'well there won't be one after all' that leaves me feeling cheated and wanting to scream at you 'What the Frack where you thinking when you wrote this?'.
Comments from author:
Sorry for the delay in replying to you and yes, as i have said to previous reviewers, i agree the ending fell short compared to the rest of the story, which I hope you enjoyed. In my mind, I wanted to finish the story and not just leave it hanging - with hindsight this may not have been the best course of action and was more a reflection of my own frustration wtih the lack of ending up to that point.
Review By [Musicalife] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who am I??" from GeekGoddess
Review:
To say I am disappointed with the ending is an understatement. You really are not a fan of Willow are you?
Comments from author:
Sorry for the delay in replying to you - actually I like writing for Willow as there are so many aspects of her charachter or attributes that you can explore. And yes, I will admit to being disappointed with the ending myself - if any better scenarios ever occur to me than i might revisit this - however, as it had been lying around unfinished for so long, I wanted to get the "monkey off my back" so to speak. The reactions to the ending of this are why I have not gone back to the "Voyager" story - partly to do it justice and partly because I just havent thought of anywhere else to go with it to tie up loose ends. Thanks again for taking the time to comment.
Review By [GeekGoddess] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who am I??" from Cutiepie
Review:
I'm missing something (actually a LOT of somethings). There isn't any closure to this story, yet it is marked complete.

I don't understand about the Hellmouth disappearing from Sunnydale or why Anita left and Buffy replaced her. I though that Anita was tied to Jean Claude in a way that would preclude her leaving.

And is Willow still somehow under Voldemort's control? How did he manage that in the first place, anyway? It seemed that he accessed her when she was sitting in front of a fire each time. Was that circumstantial, or did he use the flames in some fashion? Then there is the "tattoo" that appeared on her arm. It was my understanding that the "dark mark" had to be consciously accepted, certainly not just applied, for it to give nominal control to Voldemort and there is no way that Willow would have agreed to it. Or was that even supposed to be the dark mark?

Is there a sequel planned that will explain everything, or is this REALLY the end?
Comments from author:
Thanks you for your considered comments and I am sorry that the story left you with a few black holes - I didn't go into detail on some areas as they were not the focus of the story - the story was about family, and how even though you are not brought up together you would still do anything for family and the unconditional love that (can) bring.

One of the other themes I wanted to explore was co-incidence - life is full of them - some we miss - others we recognise and take and follow to see where they would lead. The story was full of such co-incidences which you may or may not agree were plausible or just a flight of fancy on my part.

Situations around Buffy and Anita were not the focus of the story, but a plot device to move characters to where I wanted or needed them to be. Again, although some of the chapters were from other characters points of view, the main focus was Nathaniel and going into details on situations around these other characters would have taken this story in a different direction.

For Willow and the "dark mark" I had hoped this would have been cleared up - albeit somewhat cryptically - by the musings of Voldemort at the end. Although he was able to "control" her and make her do things that were ultimately beyond her control, he was (in my mind anyway) trying to make her family believe that his control over her was that which they understood and how he had always operated.

I hope the above has helped a bit in explaining why there are a few plot holes that you could drive a double decker bus through. At times, perhaps, something that exists only in my mind does not translate that well when written down, and should I chose to tackle another story in the future I shall encourage the input of a beta reader and someone with whom ideas can be bandied back and forwards with.

Unfortunately, as it took me so long to actually be able to go back and finish this, there will be no sequel explaining and tidying up the situations for other characters.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I only feel right on my knees" from Wormbait
Review:
Another excellent story of yours that I hope you find the inspiration to revisit one day.

Well done and thanks for sharing.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I only feel right on my knees" from azulkan
Review:
Interesting story. Looking forward to more.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [5 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I only feel right on my knees" from digitalwitch
Review:
Great story so far. I really like how you combined the three worlds.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing - I'm hoping to be able to pick this story up again, along with the others that have been left lying, over the summer and get them finished off ......
Review By [digitalwitch] • Date [17 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I only feel right on my knees" from NicCuinn
Review:
I am intrigued by this story - you've done well in combining all three worlds. I applaud your creativity! :) I look forward to reading more!
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting - unfortunately writers block is lying at my feet and not moving out of my way, I reckon one more chapter and I know how it is going to end, but I just can't get myself there just now ..........(kicks at the writers block but it still refuses to move, and I've now hurt my toe ......)
Review By [NicCuinn] • Date [14 Mar 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I only feel right on my knees" from spamalot
Review:
interesting story - am new to site as a member and have lots to read and review - intersted to see how you going to end this as that has to be soon as you are about to run out of lyrics .....
Comments from author:
thanks for commenting - fortunately I think the story only has another couple of chapters to go - if it lasts longer I might have to go through The Who's back catalogue .....
Review By [spamalot] • Date [3 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I only feel right on my knees" from Cutiepie
Review:
And the two worlds FINALLY come together. Excellent work, and I am still enjoying it very much. Thank you!
Comments from author:
Glad you are still enjoying it and thanks for sticking with it.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [3 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I only feel right on my knees" from Elleria
Review:
Love this, more as soon as you can please!
Comments from author:
Glad you are still enjoying it, though I think there will only be another 2 or 3 chapters at the most - but you never know - I thought it was finished before and look what happened, lol.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I staggered back to the underground" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
ok, you are officially EVIL in my book.

But, I can't stake you yet, you need to finish the story. I might even forgive you by then ;)

Loving this story.

James
Comments from author:
better get that stake sharpened ...... lmao
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [22 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eleven Hours in the Tin Pan" from Elleria
Review:
Love this, more as soon as you can please.
Comments from author:
Thanks, as always, for commenting and for sticking with this story, it's very much appreciated.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [20 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eleven Hours in the Tin Pan" from Cutiepie
Review:
Very good, very good. And you are still teasing away at the nearness of it all. =] Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Ill do my best, LOL, think I can do a few more chapters (I hope), but I'll make sure to end it properly this time ...
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [20 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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