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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)faithfan
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Comment to SlayerandWereLeopard

After 6 YEARS, I think it is certain this story will NOT be finished, or even get any new chapters.
Review By [(Recent Donor)faithfan] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
this was a great start. Will it be continued?
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dugleikoo
Review:
pretty please update.
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from shadowMD
Review:
Neat. Are you continuing this?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review, glad you liked it. I am gonna continue this, the next chapter will focus on the two weeks between the coffee shop scene and the gate room scene. Stay tuned.
Review By [shadowMD] • Date [8 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KnightWulf
Review:
like what i've read so far and would love to read more
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, glad you liked it.
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Badia
Review:
Nice start, looks like there could be a nice romance w/some good action, hope your continuing this.
Comments from author:
I do intend for there to be a good deal of both, and I am most definately continuing it. Thank you for reading, glad you liked it.
Review By [Badia] • Date [17 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Colpinky
Review:
I've read some stories that are vaguely similar to this. I'm interested to see where you take it. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Well hopefully I can distinguish it from the others. I hope it does indeed to turn out to be an interesting ride. Thank you for reading, glad you liked it.
Review By [Colpinky] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Interesting start. I hope you carry on with this story. BTW, points for not killing Janet. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you, I do intend on writing more of it. Like I said, I hadn't originally planned for a sequel, only to realize that I sort of painted myself into a corner a bit. Thankfully I was able to haphazzardly explain around it.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
(Hate to say this but... I have to agree with the 'magic mushroom' accusation from Joe (And I'm sure he'll hit me with that one if he reads the next part of a fic I plan on posting this weekend or so. So it isn't like I don't understand how it can happen %-))).

I think you could get away with it if you spread things out a bit more. It's the suddenness that doesn't work too well. And how many couples is it? Dawn/Faith, Buffy/Cassie, Sam/Janet, and ?

But I think you have that problem in other areas... too much of the 'sudden reveal'. Buffy is seems to be telling her entire life history over a cup of coffee to someone she just met.

And... I think you have problems with the integration of this story with the one that precedes it... there seems to be a large amount of time missing between the cup of coffee and the girlfriend bit with Sam.

In the first story you have:
1 - Buffy rescues Cassie
2 - Cassie invites Buffy out for coffee
3 - weeks/days fly by.
4 - Cassie does a quick intro of Buffy to Sam

In the 2nd story you have -

A. The cup of coffe from #2 above and the 'who am I' bit
B. The scene with Sam AFTER #4 above.

It's a little confusing. You might want to consider combining the two together into a single story. It'll make more sense that way.
Comments from author:
It's four couples, the three you mentioned and Willow/Fred. Five if you count Jack and Kerry Johnson, but I don't plan on using her anytime soon. Yeah it may seem a bit sudden, bear in mind I'm more used to the femslash community where its more accepted. And its not her ENTIRE life story, just a significant chunk of it. I know, splitting hairs. I do intend to spread things out more as I've said, so hopefully it'll work itself out by taking it slower.

And you are right, there is a large amount of time missing, I'm currently swapping back and forth between Buffy and Cassie first meeting, and SG-1 a couple weeks later. Bear in mind I worte the original in twenty minutes with maybe ten minutes thought beforehand, with no intention of a sequel at the time. There's really nothing I want to explore in the missing two weeks with SG-1, so for the time being they're all after Sam left for the base, and eventually there will come a point where Buffy and Casie are caught up and they're all in the same time frame. Thank you very much for your comments, I will definately take them into consideration.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [31 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vld
Review:
So, quick guesses. Dawn's girlfriend is Faith. Andraste will take either a Slayer or a powerful witch as a host, and where does Hermione fit into all of this? And is she gay as well? And who is Jack seeing? Apparently it's a miss, so...
Comments from author:
Yes, Dawn's girl is Faith, my second favorite pairing after my beloved Wiffy. Hermione doesn't actually fit into it at all, I just like to see what other series I can fit in, and she kinda fit. As for her being gay, that's one of the things that's entirely up to the reader. If you want to picture her with Ginny, you can picture her with Ginny. If you want her with Harry, she can be with Harry, etc etc. Jack is seeing Kerry Johnson from season 8, I just bumped her up a season. As for Andraste, you'll just have to wait and see.
Review By [Vld] • Date [31 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Iceflame
Review:
About TIME! :) Looks like Cassie's also been inducted into the "Knowing" Club, as in Knowing about Things That Go Bump In The Night. I hope to see more very soon (Don't RUSH mind, as being too hasty is as bad as too slow!)
Comments from author:
You will see more don't worry, but not very soon. You're right, being hasty can severly hamper the quality and I want future chapters to live up to Springtime. Thanks for reading, glad you liked it.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [31 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoeHundredaire
Review:
Bit rough on the grammar side and it has a very Magical Mushrooms of Gayness feel to it...
Comments from author:
Yeah I admit this chapter was rushed cause I wanted to get it out in August, Stargate month on my list, and it was only coming to me in spurts. I do intend on taking my time on future chapters and hope to smooth things out.
Review By [JoeHundredaire] • Date [31 Aug 06] • Rating [4 out of 10]
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