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Review of chapter "Threats not needed..." from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Really like this story! Are you going to finish it?"
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fight or Flight? Flight thank you..." from Ahdamnit
Review:
I opened the story, saw you where using wall o' text no jutsu and decided not to even try reading it.

The enter key is your friend, remember that for future reference please.
Review By [Ahdamnit] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Threats not needed..." from Rubel
Review:
Neat. I'm not sure where this might go but it seems to be an interesting premise. Though I do wonder if Ranma is still training hard to be a better martial artist. Does he have any assistants to take over the lower level classes?
Review By [Rubel] • Date [6 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Threats not needed..." from metatwisted
Review:
Great story just wondering when or if you'd continue the story. It'd be a shame if you didn't continue.
Review By [metatwisted] • Date [13 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Threats not needed..." from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Review:
UPDATE! PLEASE! This is really good here SO GREAT!
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [15 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Threats not needed..." from Infinix
Review:
This story could very well be better by several levels of magnitude than Xander 1/2, the only other passable Ranma/BTVS xover. This start brings up several questions though. Will Jessie and Willow also be trained as Xander's friends? How much exactly will Xander change personality wise? Sure he will be more confidant but will he have any of his trademark humor and irrevrancy left or will Ranma be able to train that out of him as "american rudeness?" I really hope that this doesn't turn into a story with a completely different character of the same name.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [2 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fight or Flight? Flight thank you..." from orangemike
Review:
I'm enjoying it; but if it is female Ranma who picks up little Xander, he wouldn't necessarily make the "you're the one who has the dojo" mental leap with regard to this girl in high heels.

(Oh, yeah, VERY minor quibble: it's a *Chinese* girl muttering to herself; the drowned girl was Chinese, not Japanese, so technically Ranma's female form is a Chinese girl.)
Review By [orangemike] • Date [8 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Threats not needed..." from WhiteWolf
Review:
You know what would be fun for Xander to say, when he finds out Ranma is a he instead of a she, "I got a new mommy AND a new daddy?"
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [24 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: First Meetings" from LeftBehind
Review:
Dude, this story is awesome. Cute little Xander outside the window. Please keep writing. I think this fic is adorable.
Review By [LeftBehind] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: First Meetings" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Ah, now I know the time-line or did you already mentioned it? I don't always read the Author Notes. Anyway, I'm not sure if I like it. A grownup Ranma? He probably is too mature to be as funny as teenager Ranma. Like that Clem was in the story. I like that friendly demon.
Comments from author:
Well, not too grown up. Cause like you said, inept bumbly Ranma is the really amusing one. Maybe I'll throw in a side effect of his transformation, like it taking twice as long to mature seeing as he is now two people or something along those lines. I will try to keep it as funny as possible though.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [16 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: First Meetings" from Sadfru
Review:
great chapter but a question, is ranma simply in another country or another universe? hope for more soon :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm kinda torn. No, okay another universe. Will go back and make that more clear. Maybe in the second chapter.
Glad you like it.
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [16 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fight or Flight? Flight thank you..." from metatwisted
Review:
Good start! Can't wait to see the rest.
Review By [metatwisted] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fight or Flight? Flight thank you..." from Rob
Review:
Looks good, has potential.

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [2 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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