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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
A promising beginning (considering Giles' usual luck -- or lack of it -- with women). :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KarlStahl
Review:
Your writing and formatting is good.

But there is no real point to your story. Lorelai and Giles meet, and what happens? Nothing.

Perhaps you'd like to add a second chapter to your story sometime in the future?
Comments from author:
Ha!
Add a chapter! Ha! Nope-- not happening. Thanks for reviewing. I bloody hate the Gilmore Girls--too many insipid and immature women. This is a FFAs... the folks who run this site have an idea that they would like 2006 Fic's written for 2006.

This 330 word short is my contribution. And in order to request a pairing you have to submit story--

I guess the whole actual point was to get in the head of Giles and attempt to capture his character in a limited number of words. I am pretty sure I did that-- could have been better--but it is done. My point was to request a pairing.

Sorry if you are disappointed.

I requested Ronon Dex(stargate atlantis)/Buffy.

Stargate is my current tv. obsession.
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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