Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
A promising beginning (considering Giles' usual luck -- or lack of it -- with women). :)
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KarlStahl
Your writing and formatting is good.
But there is no real point to your story. Lorelai and Giles meet, and what happens? Nothing.
Perhaps you'd like to add a second chapter to your story sometime in the future?
Comments from author:
Add a chapter! Ha! Nope-- not happening. Thanks for reviewing. I bloody hate the Gilmore Girls--too many insipid and immature women. This is a FFAs... the folks who run this site have an idea that they would like 2006 Fic's written for 2006.
This 330 word short is my contribution. And in order to request a pairing you have to submit story--
I guess the whole actual point was to get in the head of Giles and attempt to capture his character in a limited number of words. I am pretty sure I did that-- could have been better--but it is done. My point was to request a pairing.
Sorry if you are disappointed.
I requested Ronon Dex(stargate atlantis)/Buffy.
Stargate is my current tv. obsession.
Review By [KarlStahl
] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Not Rated