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Review of chapter "The Last Piece Of The Puzzle" from Harry
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I've got a BAD feeling about this, based on that prophecy. If it means what I THINK it means, then those who did this are going to pay. Because the Horsemen WILL ride again, and those who are behind this atrocity are going to wish that they had not done so. Because when the Horsemen are done, there will be NOTHING left of them.
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fulfilling Your Own Prophesy" from maxthehobbit
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Hmm don't think this story is for me. I looked up Willow stories with the search engine on this site and this is what I got. Seems to be all Sam Carter and a very confusing 'plot' not sure what is happening, but I am sure this story has nothing to do with Willow.
Comments from author:
Yeah, this part 3 or four in a series. I imagine it would be really confusing without reading the earlier ones :) It was based off a story I wrote years ago that was a cross over with highlander.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Return of Atlantis" from ElDani
Review:
Although I was a (tiny) bit let down by the fact that this is the first story after Xander and Willow's forced separation and only focused on one of them - I simply would've liked the series to develop differently - it doesn't detract from some very unique plots you've thought up.

Ancients that were led and advanced by an immortal Willow who ended up betrayed by her own creation. The fact that all three (or four) immortals were impacted by that. The thought that they all had "avatars" while they were asleep/shackled. This kind of an innovative plot just blew my mind ;)

But there are two things I want to comment on:

I think the (ascended) Ancients, as we got to see them in the Stargate series, weren't necessarily the same as the Ancients before the great plague. I'm sure that their thousands or maybe even millions of years without a mortal body and separated from the physical plain has had quite an influence on their thinking, their culture, society and the, dare I say it, arrogance they showed in the TV series. Continuing with that line of thinking, I would love to doubt that the Ancients at the height of their power would have done to Willow what "your Ancients" did.

Secondly, I am a bit confused why Willow didn't immediately jump to Xander's universe/dimension/reality. If she truly had all the knowledge of the Ancients in her mind, then she would've known about the so-called Quantum Mirror and all the research that went into creating a device to jump realities. I just confirmed my thoughts that it was an Ancient device, at least it's categorized as such on a Stargate wiki (on stargate dot wikia dot com).
Review By [ElDani] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Return of Atlantis" from Rune
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I alway thought the Ascended were fools. The Ori too, so Willow brought them to heel. Good, may they suffer under Hild for several Eternitys.

Nice fic, thanks.
Review By [Rune] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Return of Atlantis" from (Past Donor)deitarionSSokolow
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Excellent for the first 8 chapters, but I just can't stand second-person writing when it's not a choose-your-own-adventure book (Nothing breaks immersion more than being told what I do without being given a choice about it), so I ended up skim reading so sparsely that all I got from it was that Dawn reincarnated as somebody in the Firefly universe and Willow found her.

Chapter 10 is good too but, because I like seeing consequences in more than just summary (From my freely-admitted selfish perspective, the story is making a big "show, don't tell" mistake) for consequences to setting changes like these, it feels sort of anti-climactic.
Review By [(Past Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Stranded" from LordSlytherin
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I have to say that this series is my one of my absolute favorite. Brilliant stories. It's amazing how you have blended these characters into one thrilling saga. Thank you!
Review By [LordSlytherin] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Return of Atlantis" from (Past Donor)Ryjee
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Your Willlow stands head and shoulders above any other Willow - including vamp Willows :).
Review By [(Past Donor)Ryjee] • Date [16 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Return of Atlantis" from VillageOrchid
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Interesting... especially the supposed fate or non-fate of Methos and middle earth. Perhaps he went into the land of fiction (from Doctor Who) or became Omega who founded the Gallifreyians and the timelords and eventually incarnated into the Doctor?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Escape" from VillageOrchid
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The which alternate universe thing has me a bit confused, but I can follow the characters.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fulfilling Your Own Prophesy" from VillageOrchid
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Wow, so we're talking about 40,000 years all said and told... at least 8,000 or so of the 4 reincarnating.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Last Piece Of The Puzzle" from VillageOrchid
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Ah... the souls without their bodies... interesting. Also interesting that you placed Methos in middle earth. Certainly a world of magic is very different than where he came from. Did they all live 30,000 or so years before this happened, or is the time relative? I like that their souls reincarnated together. That's kinda cool.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Betrayal" from VillageOrchid
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Ah, many things are explained, but many more to come. Thanks for sharing such a complex plot.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Return of Atlantis" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Nicely done.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Return of Atlantis" from Miranda
Review:
Your story arc is amazing... its by far the most original cross over I've read on here.. I only wish that there was more going on with willow's story... the 4 have been apart for 5 million years is it? are we ever going to see them meet again?

I really really hope that this keeps on going for a while as your stories hold me in suspense wanting for more..

keep up the great work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, don't worry as soon as I finish the Early Dawn, I'm going to start bringing the horsemen together again.
Review By [Miranda] • Date [27 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Return of Atlantis" from APS
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My thought about the fic as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [18 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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