I see you haven't updated in a while I hope you haven't given up on this story. would really like to read more.

Not a bad set up, much more subtle then most Smallville cross over stories I have read. NO instant exchange of life stories between Xander and Clark, no instant power ups or such. I am slightly disappointed the story seems to be dead though. It had a pretty good set up and was well written but seemed to die right before the major plot was revealed. Not to mention it was mostly all 'non Smallville' related so far, little to no interaction with the Smallville cast.

interesting so far. I hope you continue this someday.

Believe it or not, the first half of the next chapter is already written. Now I only have to find the time to write the rest.

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Willow?

Excellent story.

Thank you.

Hmm is it the semi obvious choice of Willow or maybe someone slightly unexpected like a Smalleville character or a minor Buffyverse character? Glad to see this being updated.

Sorry, I can't give anything away without ruining the suspense.

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Yay, a witch!

Edited to say: that's why I said 'a witch'. I think I'd like whichever one it ended up being, even if it's Amy!

Thank you. The question is: Which witch?

So happy to see an update. More as soon as you can please.

Thank you very much. You will not have to wait so long for the next chapter.

You have an interesting idea for a story here, but the execution leaves allot to be desired. While I read your story I got the feeling that English is not your native language. If this is true, more power to you; if it's not true, ouch.

What this story needs more than anything is a good beta. Your paragraphs change tense with no warning, sentence structure is short and choppy, and the words you use don't always mean what you seem to think they do. Your ideas are solid it's a shame to present them in this manner.

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Your feeling is right; English is not my native language.

I will remember your advice.

So glad you're continuing with this! And I like the way you brought in the Smallville sheriff, with her persistent skepticism and take-no-b.s. attitude, along with her determination to do her job without interference from well-meaning kids.

Can't wait to see what comes next, no matter how long it takes to post the next chapter. (That was not a slam, by the way -- just a statement that this story is worth waiting for, in my opinion.)

Thank you very much. And a special thank you for your patience.

nice story. can't wait for more.

Thank you. And thanks for checking this story out.

I like the premise of your story, the problem is that your words are too robotic, there is no emotion there. It just does not sound right, read a few good stories than take a look a yours and you should be able to tell the difference

Thank you for your honest opinion.

looking forward to the next bit.

Thank you. I admit I am looking forward to the next chapter too.

I'm enjoying seeing "the girls" put the pieces together, and can't wait to see who it is that Chloe is contacting.

Thank you. You'll find out.

Very interesting! Now I want to find out what happens next!

Thank you for leaving a review. I'm not sure what will happen next, but I have a better idea now what is actually happening. I think the next chapter will be fun.