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Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
I see you haven't updated in a while I hope you haven't given up on this story. would really like to read more.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Vilkath
Review:
Not a bad set up, much more subtle then most Smallville cross over stories I have read. NO instant exchange of life stories between Xander and Clark, no instant power ups or such. I am slightly disappointed the story seems to be dead though. It had a pretty good set up and was well written but seemed to die right before the major plot was revealed. Not to mention it was mostly all 'non Smallville' related so far, little to no interaction with the Smallville cast.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from QundraDraconum
Review:
interesting so far. I hope you continue this someday.
Comments from author:
Believe it or not, the first half of the next chapter is already written. Now I only have to find the time to write the rest.

Thank you for leaving a review.
Review By [QundraDraconum] • Date [21 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from DigiSim
Review:
Willow?
Review By [DigiSim] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Excellent story.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Infinix
Review:
Hmm is it the semi obvious choice of Willow or maybe someone slightly unexpected like a Smalleville character or a minor Buffyverse character? Glad to see this being updated.
Comments from author:
Sorry, I can't give anything away without ruining the suspense.

Thank you for leaving a review.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Yay, a witch!

Edited to say: that's why I said 'a witch'. I think I'd like whichever one it ended up being, even if it's Amy!
Comments from author:
Thank you. The question is: Which witch?
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [19 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Elleria
Review:
So happy to see an update. More as soon as you can please.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. You will not have to wait so long for the next chapter.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [19 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from DeeRose
Review:
You have an interesting idea for a story here, but the execution leaves allot to be desired. While I read your story I got the feeling that English is not your native language. If this is true, more power to you; if it's not true, ouch.

What this story needs more than anything is a good beta. Your paragraphs change tense with no warning, sentence structure is short and choppy, and the words you use don't always mean what you seem to think they do. Your ideas are solid it's a shame to present them in this manner.
Comments from author:
Thank you for leaving a review.

Your feeling is right; English is not my native language.

I will remember your advice.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [18 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from RevDorothyL
Review:
So glad you're continuing with this! And I like the way you brought in the Smallville sheriff, with her persistent skepticism and take-no-b.s. attitude, along with her determination to do her job without interference from well-meaning kids.

Can't wait to see what comes next, no matter how long it takes to post the next chapter. (That was not a slam, by the way -- just a statement that this story is worth waiting for, in my opinion.)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. And a special thank you for your patience.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from meatshield
Review:
nice story. can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. And thanks for checking this story out.
Review By [meatshield] • Date [24 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from chady
Review:
I like the premise of your story, the problem is that your words are too robotic, there is no emotion there. It just does not sound right, read a few good stories than take a look a yours and you should be able to tell the difference
Comments from author:
Thank you for your honest opinion.
Review By [chady] • Date [30 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Elleria
Review:
looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I admit I am looking forward to the next chapter too.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [7 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm enjoying seeing "the girls" put the pieces together, and can't wait to see who it is that Chloe is contacting.
Comments from author:
Thank you. You'll find out.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Very interesting! Now I want to find out what happens next!
Comments from author:
Thank you for leaving a review. I'm not sure what will happen next, but I have a better idea now what is actually happening. I think the next chapter will be fun.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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