I think the title was poorly chosen; it wasn't really "Xander", if you catch my drift. Hum... Er, well, otherwise I guess it sort-of works. Nothing to fancy, but ok. Needs a LOT of filling to make a real story though, and you need to fix the "(insert ancient egyptian equivalent of bitch)", because that's not conducive for a good flow in the story.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Why oh why were you so very cruel/evil in not continuing this wonderful fic? you could have easily made this excellent fic longer so I must ask why didn't you?
Review By [spring] • Date [26 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
good story start but i must say without anything more it's only an idea for a path to take. I would recommend writing some more or adding an author note and leave it as a challenge for others to write on the story line.
That's all?!? Come on, you have to write more. You could make up a bad ass reputation as a demon hunter for Xander, which is even known to "The Council". Furthermore you could add characters from the SG-Universe or Highlander to the story. I hope there is coming more, PLEASE!!!
Wauzi
Review By [Wauzi] • Date [20 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Revenge" from XanderHalcyon
Review:
One of my favorite stories ever!!! I wish you would make a sequel.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [26 Jun 07] • Not Rated