Review of chapter "Chapter One" from divaslayer
Awesome first chapter, I loved it.
Review By [divaslayer
] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
I hope you get inspired to continue the story/series.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from YouAreThePan
i like this and would love to see more
Review By [YouAreThePan
] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk
Are you ever going to continue this? I'd love to see how "Charmed" comes into play. :)
Review By [spk
] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Claddagh
i loke this so far, but where does Charmed come in? Looking forward to seeing more.
Review By [Claddagh
] • Date [28 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PowerStealerRogue
More please. I can see really good things coming from this story.
Review By [PowerStealerRogue
] • Date [8 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlameyFomorrii
You can't be serious! Don't doubt for a minute the greatness of this chapter. It was in the top 3 best endings to season five I've ever read, and I can't really name the other two at the moment. I loved how you added in that message to Spike (Very dear to my heart) and was happy that you simplified the telling of Buffy jumping into the portal. Most people make a big deal of reconstruction the moment exactly as the show went-with all the little details and what not; but we've all seen the show, so it's the content that counts.
And! Most people don't even give Buffy a well deserved funeral. I didn't really think about it-but this funeral makes me really happy. I know in the show, they had to keep the underworld from really knowing that Buffy was dead, so they couldn't do a big thing where the news would get out. BUT! This was very satisfying. It was especially great how all those peaceful demons, and AI and everyone came! (Also-liked how you included that Buffy wasn't especially religious, and that made the funeral more personal, less preachy)
Liked what Cordelia, Spike, and Dawn had to say. Very sweet. (Surprised at how sweet Cordelia's came out.)
Finally; I love how Giles went Ripper voice on Angel for getting all jealous and whiny on the group. Yay Giles!
Loved this chapter. What's going to happen next? I seen that it's going to be crossed over with Charmed. How's that going to work? Is Buffy going to be a white-lighter? (If so, that's both cool and sad at the same time. Instead of getting to rest, she gets to go kick demon ass/protect witches in her after life, too. Still-I wouldn't mind seeing something like that. If that's where you're going.)
Great chapter! PLEASE! Update again soon!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii
] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GothTroubleMaker
It rocks. More please? I'll give you a cookie.
Review By [GothTroubleMaker
] • Date [27 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Winchestergrl
I enjoyed it. I even had some tears in my eyes during the funeral speeches. I loved the part about Dawn giving the message to Spike from Buffy and Angel having a fit about it. It was genius. Please continue soon.
Review By [Winchestergrl
] • Date [12 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]