Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from lckybr
Review:
its got my attention, more soon?
Review By [lckybr] • Date [30 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from littleoldme
Review:
When I read something like this, my first thought is that I want to know a little background- how did Willow end up as Connor's godmother? A point of reference for when the canon went AU (such as letting us know when and why Willow left Sunnydale, and how exactly she became close to Angel) would be nice- it doesn't have to be long, just a couple of sentences that ground the setup you've chosen to use in the characters we know from the canon.
I'm excited to see a little Connor in the Anita Blake world- I always wished that someone had done a Connor response to the Mommy Anita challenge, and I'm glad that Willow's going with him.
That said, you could use a beta reader- there were a few misspellings (Connor's name, for one), typos, etc. I hope to see an update soon.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from wic