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Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from MistressRed
Review:
Dec 06
Neato idea! Please Update! Pretty pretty please!

Dec 08
I just re-read this, and I still love the idea. Hope you get a chance to finish it eventually.
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from SnakeofMedusa
Review:
Cool idea, any chance of an update soon? Please? *begs with puppy eyes still attachted to their original puppy*
Review By [SnakeofMedusa] • Date [9 Apr 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from Red
Review:
I would love to see what happens to Conner and Willow.
Review By [Red] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from (Past Donor)lckybr
Review:
its got my attention, more soon?
Review By [(Past Donor)lckybr] • Date [30 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from littleoldme
Review:
When I read something like this, my first thought is that I want to know a little background- how did Willow end up as Connor's godmother? A point of reference for when the canon went AU (such as letting us know when and why Willow left Sunnydale, and how exactly she became close to Angel) would be nice- it doesn't have to be long, just a couple of sentences that ground the setup you've chosen to use in the characters we know from the canon.

I'm excited to see a little Connor in the Anita Blake world- I always wished that someone had done a Connor response to the Mommy Anita challenge, and I'm glad that Willow's going with him.

That said, you could use a beta reader- there were a few misspellings (Connor's name, for one), typos, etc. I hope to see an update soon.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from wic
Review:
Please write more ! I like it !

wic
Review By [wic] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from (Past Donor)merlyna
Review:
Well that's clearly not enough..... need more please! :) Looks good though.
Review By [(Past Donor)merlyna] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Neverending Story Anyone?" from chajalive
Review:
I love it. Hope you decide to continue.
Chaja
Review By [chajalive] • Date [10 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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