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Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from slmncpm
Review:
WAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!! i love this.. i see it has been years since you wrote anything.. please can i beg????
Comments from author:
*smiles* I'll try, okay? I can't promise that this will be updated soon, but I'll see what I can convince my brain to give.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from nightshadowlife
Review:
oh wow I really like the second chapter, hope you find the time to update this story soon!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [2 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from Eireann
Review:
Okay adding to last night's review:

One: I do love where the story is going and Dawn's Californio is dead on (yay for living in the low desert of Southern California for five years)

Two: Jarath seems too human but then this is Jarath what do you exactly have planed or should I ask what does Jarath have planed?

Thee: The one time mention of Sarah is only needed we don't need Jarath comparing Buffy to Sarah the.

Four: How are the others (Buffy, Giles, Willow, etc.) Going to get to the Goblin Kingdom and how will their specific talents i.e. Willow's magic, Buffy's slayer abilities.

Five: Sarah as we know from the movie was practicing for a play and had the script and the world memorized to a point, Buffy and gang only watched the movie. Sarah had an idea, so to speak of what to expect when it came to the challenges and riddles. What do you plan on Buffy and gang to face while visiting the Goblin Kingdom?

Six: Are any of the other characters from that world outside of Jarath going to make an appearance (i.e. Ludo, Hoggle, etc)?

well hopefully this review has filled you with all sorts of plot bunnies to continue your story which I hope you continue writing because its bloodily brilliant (hehe yes I stole a Ronisim :D)
Review By [Eireann] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from Eireann
Review:
Okay adding to last night's review:

One: I do love where the story is going and Dawn's Californio is dead on (yay for living in the low desert of Southern California for five years)

Two: Jarath seems too human but then this is Jarath what do you exactly have planed or should I ask what does Jarath have planed?

Thee: The one time mention of Sarah is only needed we don't need Jarath comparing Buffy to Sarah the.

Four: How are the others (Buffy, Giles, Willow, etc.) Going to get to the Goblin Kingdom and how will their specific talents i.e. Willow's magic, Buffy's slayer abilities.

Five: Sarah as we know from the movie was practicing for a play and had the script and the world memorized to a point, Buffy and gang only watched the movie. Sarah had an idea, so to speak of what to expect when it came to the challenges and riddles. What do you plan on Buffy and gang to face while visiting the Goblin Kingdom?

Six: Are any of the other characters from that world outside of Jarath going to make an appearance (i.e. Ludo, Hoggle, etc)?

well hopefully this review has filled you with all sorts of plot bunnies to continue your story which I hope you continue writing because its bloodily brilliant (hehe yes I stole a Ronisim :D)
Comments from author:
*smirks evilly* You'll see. Don't worry, I've got ideas for all these points. Thank you for putting so much thought into your comments. You're very insightful, and it's reviews like these that keep me writing. Take care, and we'll see you in the ficdom...
Review By [Eireann] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from Eireann
Review:
Oh this one is just to good to just stop here I know your busy with toddler, classes, etc but *gets on knees* please I'm begging don't let this story end like this.
Comments from author:
I don't plan to let thisor any of my fics die, but thank you for the support.
Review By [Eireann] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Intrigueing, but I am really looking forward to the Buffy Jareth stuff.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [8 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from vargamor
Review:
There are just far too few fics of this nature and I hope you haven't abandoned this one. People are still reading it and waiting for an update!
Review By [vargamor] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from Emeraldfire
Review:
This promises to be a very funny fic! Please continue soon!!!!!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [14 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from purrfus
Review:
Buffy / Jareth seems like it could be fun, especially the way you have written Jareth so far. Great interaction between Jareth and Dawn, although I was surprised she didn't call him on the two part question. I was also surprised he didn't jump on the 4 years answer. But I bet you are much more subtle then I would be if I could write.
Comments from author:
Dawn is, as far as I can tell, something of a linguistic phenom, and she would have known that while it technically would be two separate questions, his phrasing made it only one. It's a linguistic trap. As for the other, there's a reason he chose not to take advantage of this opportunity for the moment. I'll be updating some of my stories after finals wrap up, BTW.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [13 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
very interesting! Dawn/Jareth interaction is very good.
Comments from author:
thanks. I had fun writing that part. ^_^
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [12 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from meekster
Review:
I have been waiting for this fic forever, well not this one , well you know what I mean. It's such a great idea that has never been done well, and you have finally hit the jackpot. My, My, what a talent you are. I am so excited about this fic. Your writing is so expressive it's a pleasure to read. I really hope that you update soon!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm always so flattered to get positive feedback. Sometimes I wonder if my writing is a little too wordy, or too formulaic. It's nice to know that the people reading it are enjoying my efforts. I write to entertain myself and to relax (and sometimes to escape the chaos that is my life), and it's really nice to know that the results are appreciated. I can't promise soon, but I will be updating. Eventually.
Review By [meekster] • Date [11 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Welcome… or Something" from (Past Donor)Catlimere
Review:
Love the start and the premise. Also liking the idea of a Buffy/Jareth pairing. Fabulous movie and I think it makes a great crossover with Buffy. Can't wait to see what happens when the gang arrives to get Dawn. Should be fun to see their reactions to everything, and Buffy as well. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I know it's been done before, but the plot bunny has dug itself a burrow in my head, and I HAVE to write it. I'm glad you like it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Catlimere] • Date [11 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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