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Review of chapter "Rebirth of a Legend" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
still loving this after a third reread hope that your muse sees fit to let you bring us more soon
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from KingDarius
Review:
somewhat interesting premise so far, bu on question: Why in the hell do you have Vader's Ghost talking like someone out of a play by William Shakespeare? i can't stand the little pricks works, simply cause of the way they speak, so it irritates me probably more than it should.
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rebirth of a Legend" from Genuka
Review:
I'd love to see this updated.
Comments from author:
I'm working on it

Thanks
Review By [Genuka] • Date [12 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rebirth of a Legend" from Raider
Review:
an interesting concept.

one question: does this mean faith's an alien?
Comments from author:
Technically both she and Xander are aliens, but they are also both human. Thank You for the reveiw.

Peace
Review By [Raider] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rebirth of a Legend" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
lol I think Buffy will throw a fuss about being pushed in to Team B :)
Comments from author:
They all will, Especially when each of them is defeated by a member of the Team A. Thank You for for your reveiw.

Peace
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [20 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rebirth of a Legend" from kayron
Review:
Well well! A take charge Wesley who is actually capable of being in charge! And he hasn't even gone through his Rogue Demon Hunter (on AtS) phase. Buffy and the others may think that Wesley's team is useless, but I think that they will find out that they are very wrong.
Comments from author:
Indded they will, especially when his soulmate arrives. Thank You for the Reveiw
Review By [kayron] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rebirth of a Legend" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thank You
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl-New Possibilities" from CarterOfMars
Review:
Huh, I'm not a major fan of Willow, but I'm not a fan of white-washing Xander's part in the fluke either. No need to make Xander out to be some paragon of virtue. He had his flaws too, he was just more likable with them than the female Scoobies.
Comments from author:
After the 'Fluke' Willow was still allowed to be part of the team,Xander was not. IN the aftermath of the 'Fluke' Xander lost everything, Willow did lose much at all (Oz forgave her after sometime, but he did forgive her). Buffy was immediately there for Willow (A Girl Solidarity Thing), no one seemed to be there in Xander's corner. Cordelia's role was also diminished (Come out snark at Xander and then disappear from the episode). Both Xander and Willow were equally guilty in the affair, both tried to square things with their exes (Willow Succeeded in getting Oz Back, Xander failed in winning Cordelia back), but they did try. Post 'Fluke' both Xander and Cordelia were cast out of the group (Did anyone except Xander visit Cordelia in the Hospital, if so it was not on the screen). After everything that happened, despite what people thought of him, Xander proved to Faith that he was not a total waste of time. Wesley meanwhile was mearly used as something to make pompous annoying sounds, of little real use to the group.

My focus in this story is to take these characters some place new. Cordie, Xan, and Wes: Outsiders who prove their worth inspite others perceptions. In the Coming chapters, Curses will be lifted in ways that have never be done before, there will also be romantic pairings that also have never been done before (The Next one coming will be between Scoobies, the next one between Stargate Characters). Thank You for reading the story, I hope you continue.

Peace
Review By [CarterOfMars] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rebirth of a Legend" from darthridian
Review:
nice story so far,

would like to see more soon.

just wondering who the furlings are, are they the jedi? mon calamari? bothans? whatever species yoda was?

keep up the nice writing.
Comments from author:
In this story the word 'Furling' is a mispronunciation of 'Forceling', the Jedi are the 'Furlings', this won't be revealed for many chapters. The Hyperspace Sled is what brought Faith to earth, it is just an empty shell, Faith has all the relevant technologies, she will be sharing some of them in the next chapter.

Peace
Review By [darthridian] • Date [19 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rebirth of a Legend" from sunamee
Review:
Another great update. I look forward to the impact of the Furling technology.
Comments from author:
The Technology is in Faith's posession, in the next chapter she will be sharing some of it.

Peace
Review By [sunamee] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rebirth of a Legend" from Bluesnowman
Review:
nice chapter.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10. Awakenings, Explanations, and Histories" from Bluesnowman
Review:
very good so far I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thank You, I'm working on the next chapter, I hope to have it up soon.

Peace
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [18 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10. Awakenings, Explanations, and Histories" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
good story so far, I was always sorry to see Anakin die in the SW Series so now I look forward
what your Ideas are for him.
Comments from author:
Thank You
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [18 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10. Awakenings, Explanations, and Histories" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thank You
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10. Awakenings, Explanations, and Histories" from pulverizer
Review:
This seems very promising. I see you responded to one of the reviews that the chapters would get longer, so my only complaint is gone :)
Comments from author:
Thank You. I will be combining up coming chapters as needed to maintain length. The story is already on paper, now I just have to get it into the computer.

Peace
Review By [pulverizer] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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