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Review of chapter "Life Changes" from Markelo
Review:
I really like this one!!!!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [28 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Changes" from purrfus
Review:
Not a big WaT fan but I really enjoyed this story. I liked the idea of and the presentation.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost? Found." from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Writing's improved dramatically from the first chapter...good work.

Like some of your other reviewers I think the Slayer-verse characters talked too quickly, also the story line seemed to be wrapped up too quickly. I think this fic would have been better if it had been one or two chapters longer. You need to do a sequel.

Otherwise I thought this was pretty good with some good charaterisation and good dialogue towards the end. Well done.

All the best,
Dave T.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [18 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Changes" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
More please. I know the story says finished but I should like to ask for sequels....did I mention I could do bribes??? Thanks for a lovely wrap Up!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [16 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Life Changes" from WingL
Review:
Nice story. Looking forward to the story after this one.
Review By [WingL] • Date [16 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life Changes" from war
Review:
good story hope you write a sequel.
Review By [war] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Attempting Rituals" from KarlStahl
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Good writing so far. I like your story. Getting bitten by a werewolf is a harsh crash course on the reality of the supernatural, isn't it? How will Jack deal with it, once he realizes the consequences?
Review By [KarlStahl] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Attempting Rituals" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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AARGH....way too short....more soon...Pretty please!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interviews" from CPTSkip
Review:
Whoa! Didn't see that coming! I really thought there was a rule about never giving Willow caffeine. Dang it! Doesn't the FBI ever read the rule books? Lol! Great story so far. Please keep writing.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interviews" from Irene
Review:
I'm afraid I've got to agree with Silverfish- while this story started out well, it seemed that in the last chapter, they all spilled everything far to easily. The Sunnydale people at least have been keeping the secret since they were teenagers, it would be more realistic for them to say as little as they could without making the situation worse, and contact Giles.

The first two chapters were fantastic, but the last chapter let the rest down.
Comments from author:
As I told Silverfish, I did modify the post to explain why that happened, but it was part of my storyline...otherwise, Jack and the others would not have recognized the vampires when they entered the bullpen? I had some problems writing this chapter for that reason. The secret needed to come out, but I wasn't sure how to do it, unfortunately. I did try to improve it with an explination after I read your comment, but I'm afraid that while I agree they blabbed their secrets far to easily, the storyline required it. Hopefully, the next chapter will be far better than chapter 3.
Review By [Irene] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interviews" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Continue to be intrigued. Oddly enough everyone stayed true to character...not sure about the last section when Jack sends Danny for help but I'm hoping the explanation on how the bad guys got in the building occurs....final note I loved the deadboy and hyena boy insults, that was simply put a lovely example of the Xander & Angel dynamic.
Comments from author:
I did notice that I hadn't explained that, so I modified the post slightly to add a comment from one of the vampires on that.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interviews" from war
Review:
interesting interview looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interviews" from Silverfish
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Darn... this chapter jumped the shark. And chapters 1 & 2 started out really well too... I almost thought this would be another "Misunderstandings" by DonSample. Alas... it seems that no matter how secretive some characters are in their native universes... for neither rhyme nor reason, they seem to confess much too easy when they cross over.
Comments from author:
After your comment (well, morning after you made it in my case) I took a look at the chapter and I had to agree with you. It did seem like they blabbed a little too easily. So I went back and made some changes to explain why the blabbed so easily, since it was a necessary part of my storyline (reason in chapter 4).
Review By [Silverfish] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Research" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Jack's not gonna be happy, with that said I look forward to your next post. Final note my money is on the Post Sunnydale Xander in a contest of wills between Jack & Xander. Also look forward to seeing if Willow shows up.....and how she interacts.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Research" from JoeB
Review:
I always enjoy the law enforcement runs into the slayers story lines. This one looks like it will be more fun than most.

One thing you might want to change is in Margret's science experiment instead of having her connect positive to positive, have her connect line voltage to ground.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review and your comment about the science experiment. I went and modifed that part using your idea. I'm not exactly a science expert, so I thank you for that comment.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [13 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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