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Review of chapter "CHAPTER SIX: MUSICAL FLOORS" from Innogen
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I've had insomnia for so long and wondered,
What was happening next,
Hoping that Adam would show,
And Ronnie wouldn't end up sans neck!

Anway, I still love this story, as well as Blue Sun. I hope you can crank out another Chapter or Two - that's fun? (okay, this 'coda' wans't even supposed to rhyme, oh well).

~Inny
Review By [Innogen] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CHAPTER SIX: MUSICAL FLOORS" from VillageOrchid
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Hey, great to see more of this story!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CHAPTER SIX: MUSICAL FLOORS" from AllenPitt
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and at last, to the answers. I kind of hope Veronica is a pre-immortal. The kind of lifestyle she has, it's her only chance of living to see 25.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "CHAPTER SIX: MUSICAL FLOORS" from MarcusRowland
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“Christ, Ronnie, why is it you can’t seem to get through a single week without getting into some kind of life threatening situation?”

“Guess I’m just lucky that way,”

She got that one right! Just trying to imagine how she and Logan will react to immortality, if Adam agrees to show them.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [12 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ahead of the Game" from (Past Donor)Ponder
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This one is coming along very nicely. Things are getting revealed to poor Veronica for logical plot-based reasons, rather than sudden out-of-the-blue info dumps. Keep it up. :)

*** Ponder
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ahead of the Game" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Nice, good to see this back in action :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [6 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ahead of the Game" from JediLaSombra
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Ooooooh, an update and a good one at that. can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [JediLaSombra] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Nine O’Clock News" from angrymonkey
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So far this is a pretty neat story. I just finished the VM series and was actually looking for highlander cross overs.
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Nine O’Clock News" from Elleria
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Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Nine O’Clock News" from VillageOrchid
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Very cool. Good writing style. I don't know much by Mars, but enjoying this.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reviving the Case" from VillageOrchid
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Very Nancy Drew -- at least from Joe's and Adam's perspective. More information was revielled about her to them through that exchange than she learned about them, that's for sure. Thanks for sharing the story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jailbait" from VillageOrchid
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Glad that the John Doe wasn't who they thought it was... and he's still at the hotel.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Nine O’Clock News" from CPTSkip
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Wee doggies! This is one terrific story. Your Veronica and her voice are perfect and you do a terrific job with the other characters too. And now she has been pulled into the Immortal world... Well, I'll bet Veronica is going to make a great Watcher. If she doesn't become Attorney General or head of the FBI first. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Nine O’Clock News" from TheatricalBarrister
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You've done a great job capturing the flavor of the witty dialog of VM & Co. This is turning out to be an interesting and entertaining fic.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Nine O’Clock News" from AllenPitt
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this is interesting. So maybe an immortal has found out about the watchers, and gotten all paranoid about them? Thinks they're dedicated to destroying immortals? Actually--based on the actions of that rogue group in some eps...he might be justified--maybe he got attacked by that group, and thinks all watchers are like that? Then sees Joe Dawson, a known member, talking with immortals & figures it's all a huge conspiracy?
It would be nice if Veronica turned out to be immortal, in her line of work she won't see 30 otherwise...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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