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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from dreameralways
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I think some random, no name slayer should kill Murdoch. After doing so many bad things and kidnapping Dawn, it seems like the Council would have sent out a kill order to all the minis. It would be kind of fitting that for all his delusions of grandeur, he gets taken out by a foot soldier. Entertaining read and thanks for writing.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Lorency
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A MacGyver crossover! I love it.
Review By [Lorency] • Date [27 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from RevDorothyL
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Awww...! You know, I always wanted to see MacGyver in the role of paterfamilias, and I'm so glad you found a way to make that happen with both Dawn and Xander, as well as SAM. Eager to read anything else you might write in this crossover vein.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from VillageOrchid
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The story has been a little more breezy and sketchy on the scene length where there are characterization moments, than to my taste - but a good story overall. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meetings" from dragonfan
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The showdown was excellent, Murdoc as a demon? perfect, Xander in the hospital was great and I loved Jack giving him a shoulder to cry on.

I only have one nit pick, if the supernatural is a secret, then the medics couldn't have set Xander's collarbone with a spell. It is just one line and only half of it at that, but it really throws everything else off if you leave it. I'd have Xander tell Jack he's just brusied and then have Xander mentally thanking Willow for the bone healing spell. *shrug* Just my take on the situation.

I'm really glad that Mac is going to be ok. How about Sam?


*edit* What I really meant was that he wouldn't be telling Jack that unless for some reason he already knew about the whole supernatural deal. But the Council Medics idea works very well.
Comments from author:
Whoops...I guess I didn't explain that too well. I meant a Med team trained by the Council. I don't think the Council would have all those Slayers running around without training a few of their own med teams in case of an emergency.
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [22 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the Hospital" from RevDorothyL
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We've seen Mac pull back from the brink of death before, but it was still a relief, and I love how protective Xander is, now that he's got a father and brother he can actually be proud to claim.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Warehouse, Pt 3" from VillageOrchid
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Nicely written and dramatized.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Warehouse, Pt 3" from RevDorothyL
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I should've guessed Murdoc was actually a demon, from all the times he "died" but didn't and got away through openings no human should've been able to squeeze through. I love to see Xander let the Hyena and Soldier come out and play, and I'm only sorry Murdoc got away.

Still, with Scoobies thirsting for vengeance on his trail, I'm sure Murdoc's few remaining days will be . . . MEMORABLE, shall we say?

Can't wait to read more.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [20 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Warehouse, Pt 2" from dragonfan
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Oh yes! Murdoc vs Heyna and Soldier boy? What a show down that'll be! Will Mac get to see it or will he still be out?
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Warehouse, Pt 2" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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Interesting...I like that the hyena is going to show up...do want more detail though paragraphs seem too short but I do like the story....
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Murdoc" from dragonfan
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Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you! *dancing around in delight*

Ok, time to settle down now. *still grinning from ear to ear* That was wonderful! I loved Spike telling Willow about how Mac's luck runs and how nuts Murdoc is. Loved how you covered the questions I had earlier and how Mac does know about the supernatural!
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [17 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Father, Meet Son" from RevDorothyL
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I love the idea of Mac as Xander's real dad and SAM as Dawn's boyfriend/suitor (as well as the idea that it was a family of demons who were the unspecified friends of his mother who sheltered him and helped him get out of China when he was so brutally orphaned as a child). I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [17 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Father, Meet Son" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Thanks for continuing and changing a title a little bit.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Father, Meet Son" from dragonfan
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Wat too? Oh boy this is turning into a multi-fic. I love those!

Hmmm, the snatch and grab really wasn't Murdoc's style, you'll have to explain why he deviated from his pattern. No 'sophistication', ie no elaborate plot, no disturbing notes, no leading Mac around by the nose before reveling himself, and no elaborate disguise. Perhaps he gave up because Mac always out thinks him?
Comments from author:
Only a little bit of WaT. This is mostly MacGyver/Buffy.

As for the snatch and grab...that was what popped into my head and I couldn't get it out. I will explain it in the next chapter.
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [17 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meetings" from dragonfan
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This is going to be a great fic! Not only do you have a Xander as Mac's son going on, you've included my favorite villain. Murdoc rocks! Can you have Mac know about demons and keeping it from Sam? He's been all over the world in a lot of dangerous situations, so I'd imagine he's run into demons sooner or later. I can just see him and Sam steering each other away from demons and being so worried about getting the other out of there that they don't notice what the other is doing.
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [16 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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