Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
I have just reread this story and it was just as good as the last time I read the story.
Be bold and mighty powers
will come to your aid.
- Basil King
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PrincessTai
Oh. Awww. I've NEVER been so pissed with Cole in my life.
Not even when he was being a complete stalker, emo, moron on Charmed.
Though I have to say yay for cool big brothers, grandfathers, and uncles!
Poor kid. I practically held my breath for the entire thing. I was so freaked for Giles and the kids.
Review By [PrincessTai
] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
A very nice little episode! I like the way that Ben shows that he cares about his little sister and that he also wants to do his part to help. And Xander showed that, sometimes, its best to listen to children when they tell their parents things, especially when the kids are a mixture of human and demon.
Review By [Harry
] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from supernaturalfanatic
So much for thinking of a happy ending... It was still a very good story, don't get me wrong! I was happy to see Xander in the fic! Poor, poor Cole.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I was really worried about the ending. I thought maybe it wasn't going to be well received. But I really couldn't figure out what else to do.
Review By [supernaturalfanatic
] • Date [20 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from romero
Boy, Cole has alot of trust to rebuild..poor guy is so hurt and angry at himself for not believing little Buffy. I can just imagine Cole in his Demon form, snarling and releasing alittle smell of Brimstone. How brave the kids were when their Granpa was attacked!! I like reading about their Demon form and how they're learning to use the demon side.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for your comments. I was so worried about how I ended this fic. However, I just didn't see any other way to end it. Thanks for the comments about their demon side. I always thought that Charmed never really covered that. It always seemed like they wanted to just forget the demon was there. I always felt there was a lot of potential missing. Thanks again!
Review By [romero
] • Date [20 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]