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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-three" from Blackett
You are evil! You can't just let this unfinished......Kidding....please update!!!
Comments from author:
I know, right? I always said that if I wrote fanfiction I wouldn't end up one of those folks that leaves their work undone. And yet, here I am, doing exactly that. I do have most of the last chapter written. I am just entirely unhappy with it. I renew my promise to finish this story, barring unforseen horror IRL. Thank so much for your review.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-three" from MarcusSLazarus
Looks interesting, to say the least.

Your explanation for Veronica and Wallace becoming involved in the current situation was simple but effective, and the subsequent twists as they turned to Angel and Spike for assistance in understanding this new world they’d found themselves came across well, albeit briefly (I might have preferred it if Angel and Spike had explained their histories to Veronica themselves rather than Xander, but it was still good).

Add in such twists as the idea of Illyria ‘merging’ with Fred on a spiritual level rather than just completely ‘devouring’ her- to say nothing of bringing in Veronica’s now-turned mother as one of the villains-, and the return of Drusilla, and this story made for a highly intriguing piece of work that I wouldn’t mind seeing more of...

Actually, that ties in to my only two real questions about this plot;
1. Where’s the epilogue?
2. Will there be more stories in this series?

If the answer is ‘yes’ to at least the first one, hope to see the next chapter soon; if it’s ‘yes’ to both, keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your review! I'm sorry that I haven't had much time to finish the epilogue, as I have been attending classes for the past year (with an absolute beast amount of homework), as well as moved out of my family's home and with my new fiancée. I hate leaving my story unfinished, and I promise I will finish it as soon as real life gets its arm off from aroundy neck. Again, thank you so much for your wonderful review!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [9 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-three" from Misty
Just a quick note to say I love the fact Fred's still in the picture. In fact, I think I prefer Illyria like this than how she was on the show. Thank you
Comments from author:
No, thank YOU! I do have to admit though, the idea Fred is still in Illyria wasn't mine. That came from watching how Amy Acker portrayed the character and how the character was portrayed in the IDW comics leading up to the ongoing Angel book.

I will, however,l take credit for the way Illyria is portrayed here. I feel it's fairly different than how she's depicted in "After the Fall." In fact, I started this story before that book was published, so I'm hoping that this isn't too recognizable from other author's efforts in writing this interesting character.
Review By [Misty] • Date [28 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-three" from Greywizard
Just came across this story and have to say how much I enjoyed reading it.

Your characterizations are spot on, and you've handled all of the characters extremely well.

Looking forward to seeing what the epilogue brings.

Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comments from author:
And thank you for reading and reviewing it! I'm genuinely flattered by your words. As for the epilogue, I've got about a page of it done, so hopefully it'll be up soon. Of course, judging by the fact my last update of this story was a freaking year ago, who knows? Regretfully, I'm not terribly prolific.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-two" from disadventurer
Hey I just read the story and it is great. Nice job. Though I wouldn't mind of an epilogue to wrap things up.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my story! And please, don't worry. The last chapter is being worked on as I type.

Well, not literally, but you get the idea. It's just taking a long time. My computer left me for a younger owner, and I was stuck with an old, decrepit Mac that had only a single core processor and USB 1. USB 1! I really couldn't stand using the thing.

Plus real life kept getting in the way. Issues with real people that I had to deal with.

But that's all over with for the most part, and I got a new Macbook Pro to boot! So I promise -cue heroic music- to finish this story, and all my other ones, so long as I can still type!

Again, thank you very much for your wonderful review.
Review By [disadventurer] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-two" from AnnOfMidnight
Aw! Poor Spike!
Comments from author:
I know! It was a wretch writing that. Thanks for another wonderful review!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [21 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-one" from arkeus
Didn't they explain about the soul curse and everything?

Silly Veronica.

This isn't good, is it?

Too bad she didn't ask Willow to curse Lianne mars with a soul, that would have been the best strategy, i guess.
Comments from author:
The key word here is 'curse'. Angel is cursed with his soul. It's why he spent a century feeling guilty and remorse. Inflicting Lianne with that wouldn't be the right thing to do. Willow understands that. It's one thing to re-ensoul someone who's used to the idea of feeling remorse for being a mass murderer, it's another thing entirely to shove that soul down some vamp for the first time. That's my reasoning anyway.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [19 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from arkeus
Argh, a bit violent there with the traitor...:/

nice work overall.
Comments from author:
I hope violence doesn't bother you too much, because the scale does go up in later chapters.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from arkeus
Wonderfully nice chapter, there.

The end...perfect.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I was really happy with it as well.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from arkeus
oooh, another buffy plan is going to explod on her face :-)

Review By [arkeus] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from arkeus
i still wonder what was up with giles when he refused fred. Did he really, or was she, somehow, saved wihtout telling them or something?

Wonder wonder....

Maybe it was because willlow was unavailable (in another dimension/Dead) at the time.
Comments from author:
The way it seemed to me was, Buffy's camp didn't trust Angel's, so they didn't want to get involved and that's why they didn't help Fred.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from arkeus
Good. Sad that your gunn still doesn't consider angel as his friend, but that could be expected.

So this is post NFA?
Comments from author:
If you'll recall, Gunn stated his feelings towards demons during the season three episode, "That Old Gang of Mine". I merely extended that reasoning here. His experiences since then have changed that opinion some, but he still essentially doesn't like demons. And yes, this is post NFA.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from arkeus
hum.. less awkward than i htought it would be. Ok, going to read it, though i quite prefer the buffyverse to the angel one, so...:/
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad it's better than you expected. I like Buffy characters more as well. However, when I imagined this story, Angel and his crew were the ones that seemed to fit the most. Of course, I had to put Xander and Willow in there, just to make things easier on me. They're my favorite characters on the shows.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [18 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-one" from Satori
"The lawyer stopped behind another pillar and fired his own ganked assault weapon so Xander could escape the rapidly diminishing cover his own pillar provided."

Ganked, as far as i know, means "killed"
Try "purloined", "pilfered" or "looted" if "stolen" isn't good enoughf or you.

nice new chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I genuinely appreciate any and all spelling and grammar corrections you guys offer. It feels like you've got my back. In a literary sense anyway. However, in this case, the use of "ganked" is correct. I know because I wasn't sure how to spell it -I'm an atrocious speller and couldn't live without a spell check of some kind- so I typed it into google and read the definition on the urban dictionary. There are, like, eight different definitions, one of which refer to being killed by a higher level being in an MMORPG. So I guess we're both right.

Thanks again for the great review. Please, let me know if you perceive any more mistakes on my part.
Review By [Satori] • Date [21 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-one" from AnnOfMidnight
Ah Veronica... Your mom wasn't great when you were human, what makes you think she would be as a vamp?
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Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [21 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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