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Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (Final Chapter)" from lorwen
Review:
good job...
I loved the story...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [16 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (Final Chapter)" from LordSia
Review:
Ouch! My mom gets pissed if I oversleep (and I study on a free schedule, so technically, I can't sleep in... Which tells you a lot about my mom), and she's damn scary when mad. Forgetting to call my "Demonic God-Empress" mother for a millennia or ten?
#Whimper#
Funny story, Xander/Raven is a good pairing, mainly because I like them both. Creative, fun, dramatic, with both the Epic Romance and Epic Sacrifice, while maintaining that slightly humorous tone. Good work, dude, good work...
Review By [LordSia] • Date [7 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (Final Chapter)" from Vilkath
Review:
Not a great ending but considering all the stories by this author left totally incomplete it is still better then nothing. The plot twist of Trigon being Ilria's son was pretty funny and basically made the whole story worth it.
Comments from author:
Weapon XH, Iron Gear, Whats up Doc, Xander and the Snake, Something about the Eyes, I Think I'm Roaming, Slayer, Animal I've Become, 'Alexander', Xanders Demon Girlfriend, Only Skin Deep, What Pack?, Blood of Mathias, From the Pits.

These are the Major stories that I started, some I have somewhat decided to 'Finish' by putting the end tag on them, so don't expect updates, most I am still working on, but that's still fourteen out of fifty nine stories that i am working on.

they are not dead and neither am I, so... hope you enjoy.

-Tjin
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (Final Chapter)" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Great story, the start was a little over the top, but once you got past that, it was totally cool!

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (Final Chapter)" from Bobboky
Review:
i kinda liked the unique ending
Comments from author:
thanks glad you enjoyed it, i have to admit it was a stone cold brat to write out but i like how it came out in the end.

thanks for the review.

-Tjin
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (Final Chapter)" from Questara
Review:
Fun Fic, there aren't enough good fics where Xander shows his true heroism, so thanks for this one. (Okay, some would call his heroism, obsession, or stupidity, hey, there you go)
Review By [Questara] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (Final Chapter)" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great story.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [15 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (Final Chapter)" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked your story. The ending was a bit anticlimactic as far as physical clobbering goes, but it was emotionally satisfying. I like it was Faith who went after Xander. And that Xander now will have Smurfette as a grandmother-in-law. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6 (Final Chapter)" from FlitShadowflame
Review:
very interesting stuff ^.^
Review By [FlitShadowflame] • Date [15 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "a What in Law 5" from MarcS
Review:
Very enjoyable so far.
You must continue this story, as there is a great deal of explanation due.
Review By [MarcS] • Date [5 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "a What in Law 5" from LordCorwin
Review:
Woot ... More Please
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [5 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "a What in Law 5" from (Past Donor)Aynot
Review:
Cool! Illyria is Trigon's Mother; that is just darn funny. I would love to see more of that seen. So please, write more soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)Aynot] • Date [5 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "a What in Law 5" from Infinix
Review:
Actually I think my pride is hurt that I didn't see it coming. And if this is only going to be a few chapters longer I really hope they will be lon chapters because this is a great fic.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [4 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "a What in Law 5" from (Past Donor)AmarinRose
Review:
Whoa. Didn't see that coming at all. Illyria is Xander's grandmother-in-law? *shiver* Oooh, poor Xander...
Review By [(Past Donor)AmarinRose] • Date [4 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "a What in Law 5" from Cutiepie
Review:
Wow! Nope, didn't see that one coming. And then I was almost afraid to take it literally, but I'm gonna.

I think it is a good thing for Xander that Illyria has those "annoying" human emotions, and that she has been . . . tolerating? being around humans for a little while now. I mean, she didn't squish Faith immediately, so that is something right there. He may just get out of this mess relatively whole, and get back to his lovely Raven. Wouldn't it be something if Raven actually found a living relative that she could possibly . . . have a functional relationship with? It would probably do wonders for Illyria too, if she could just get past the humanity aspect of it.

I would love for you to write lots more of this, but even just finishing this off will be a "thumbs up" for me. =D
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [4 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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