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Interrogation

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting. I like it.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [20 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Starbug
Review:
Very nice: almost exactly what I had in mind when I posted the paring.
Review By [(Past Donor)Starbug] • Date [2 Oct 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Liked the story and the whole idea...very good. Spooks is great, has it really been going that long!?!?

But you need to edit your story. There were missing words, unnecessary words, incorrect tenses and such. Also I found following who was saying what a bit difficult at times.

Keep writing.
All the best,
Dave T.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [2 Oct 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CedarPineSpruce
Review:
Lovely.
Review By [CedarPineSpruce] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SlowMercury
Review:
This is an interesting story, and I'd love to see more of it, but you need to edit your story for tenses. You switch from the past tense (the normal tense for writing stories) into the present a couple of times, and I found it very distracting.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kaleecat
Review:
very nicely done. I used to watch MI-5 (spooks) regularly but then A&E made it so difficult to figure out when it was on I lost track. I miss some of the old characters, esp. Tom Quinn, but glad the new season is airing here.

Nice work with dialogue, and Giles' & Dawn's actions. Loved the ending too. thanks for sharing this.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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