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Review of chapter "Preperations" from Netchka
Review:
Well it's been six years. I'm guessing that this fic may not be finished? I hope it will be, cause it's very good. I love reading The Sentinel and Buffy crossovers, they're my favorites.
Comments from author:
Probably not finished as is. I'm probably going to end up rewritting the whole series, if I ever get my muses back. Problem is that every time I start to get them back, a chronic medically issue flares up and seems to scare them off again. So, probably going to rewrite it since I've learned a lot more about writing since this started.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preperations" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Well, it's been several years since heartsarewild last wrote an update to this exciting storyline. And I would greatly appreciate it if the author would be able to come back and finish it!!!
Oh, yes I am most assuredly a Pernography fan!
Comments from author:
Ah, but my muses seem to have deserted me on this one. I'm trying to coax them back, but so far, it's not working.

And, I gotta ask to be sure, but it seems so obvious, are you a Dragonriders of Pern fan?
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preperations" from Rune
Review:
Whole series review.

Its good but there is not enuf blood and death.

Murdoc and the other idiot need to die!

Kill the enemy, fast before they kill you, or Willow gets mad at you...
Review By [Rune] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preperations" from Duskie
Review:
love your series hope you continue.
I really want to know who the Champions of Light are. I really hope Xander and Mac are counted as then and not just slayers and witches.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preperations" from purrfus
Review:
The last few chapters have seemed a little reluctant, almost as if you were dragging them on to the page word by word. For those of us who know the BtVS and Sentinel background the story is understandable and enjoyable. For anyone not totally familiar with those shows and or any of the other characters in the story the abruptness of some of the parts is a problem.

Overall I am enjoying this series and this story.
Comments from author:
I noticed that when I was writting them, too. I had the beginnings of serious writers block...which has hit me full on now. I'm still working on it.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Understanding and Finding a Guide" from dragonfan
Review:
Yea! It's Martin! and Drat!! They got kidnapped! Oh well, it had to start sooner or later.

Ok, again with constructive critisism. You need to do more background. In this chapter you needed to have a little more explaination from Blair to Danny about what a Sentinel is and does, mostly because Blair is a chatterbox. Second, Martin needs to get his own explaination. Other than that, great chapter!
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [7 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Disaster" from docjen
Review:
I just found your "New York Slayers" series and am really enjoying it. Please, keep the updates coming and continue the great work.
Review By [docjen] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian of Born of Slayers-Called" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I could have sworn that I've already have reviewed this story, I probably started to write a review and didn't submit it because the words didn't fell right. Anyway, I like the story, but I think you're overdoing it with the family connections. Too many sons that didn't know who their fathers were.
Comments from author:
Trust me, this is the last one. I swear. No more people not knowing who their father's are.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian of Born of Slayers-Called" from dragonfan
Review:
This is a wonderful series. I only have one question, who is Danny's Shaman and are you going to bring him on line? Ok, that's two questions. *sheepish grin*
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [3 Oct 06] • Not Rated
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