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Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from jimk
Review:
I may check out the next fic in the series but if it goes anything like this one then I have to agree with the people where you first posted it. It was a fantastic and creative fic up until the last chapter or two when I felt like reading it had turned into a complete waste of time. All the changes you made and then suddenly it all craps out and slavishly follows canon which kind of defeats the whole point of things. Not saying you can't do as you wish but for me there is zero fun in reading fics that end up simply repeating canon.

Awesome that sounds much more fun!
Yeah, don't wish to be insulting in a review but at the same time just sugar coating how different I felt about the end of the fic versus the rest of it wouldn't have provided much value either. Glad you understood.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your (brutally) honest review. The reason I did a canonlike ending for that story was because, well, I liked that particular ending. Sometimes people write their stories and they try to fix things that happened in canon. What I like to do is that while you can try to fix certain canonical mistakes, but ultimately, since we're human, we're just going to make colossal new ones. Belmo tried to fix things, and ended up making really stupid mistakes in the process.

You shouldn't have to worry about the other stories though. Since this was my first story I had a nasty habit of sticking to transcripts. The downside is that they act as crutches and it becomes tempting not to stray too much from them. I used a lot less of them in my other stories. In fact the next story has a storyline that starts kinda canonny but ends up going completely overboard.
Review By [jimk] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from Omegaprime
Review:
My first time reading this story and it is totaly awsome story and a pretty wierd but cool crossovers.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your kind words. I hope you like the other parts as well.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from LetsRandom
Review:
I liked the story so far! Moving on to the rest
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [13 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from RafMereC
Review:
Great story.
Reading the rest.
Looking forward for more great story telling.
Raf.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [10 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from Ansku
Review:
Brilliant :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [12 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from darksentinent
Review:
okay, i like the story. I really do. But one thing i can`t forgive is teaching Buffy the signature move that only Goku and sons use. For the love of god man, Thats Goku reserves only. sheesh, Buffy would have stuck better with that shoe than this. Thats the one thing i hate you for. Really pissed off about it but it`s your story and i still enjoy it and will continue to enjoy it. I still can`t believe you did that.
Comments from author:
Okay, fair enough.

Here's my reasoning for it:
- It may have been Goku's signature move, but Gohan, Krillin, Yamcha and Cell (for obvious reasons) could also do it. In martial arts moves aren't copy righted (thank god!), besides, Goku stole it from Kame-Senin to begin with.
- Belmo gave the Scoobies a couple of moves. Xander prefers the Piccolo's Makankosapo because it's the move that packs the biggest punch of them all (barring Tien's Kikoho, but that move is lethal for the user as well). Faith will do whatever she likes. Buffy just stuck with the Kamehamaha because of the pretty lights.
- It will serve a purpose later on.

I can't promise you Buffy will stop using it because I not really into coming up with signature moves for everybody. Somehow it reminds me of American Wrestling. I'll promise though that as soon as Goku and Buffy meet he'll criticize her for her sloppy form. ;-)
Review By [darksentinent] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from Kirallie
Review:
Interesting. Stupid Buffy blaming everyone but herself. She has no right to tell him to get out of town like that.
Comments from author:
Well, from her POV he made things worse, it is only we who know otherwise. ;)
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [28 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from calikocat
Review:
The entire story was extremely awesome! And I'm glad you kept the ending pretty much the same, as I feel Spike becomes a very important character to the entire series...but that could just be my inner Spike-fangirl squeeing. ^^ And did I mention super Xander is awesome as well? Hee.
Comments from author:
Keeping the ending more or less the same was always paramount for Slayer and the Saiyan, as I thought the Season 2 ending to be the best of the entire series. So the only difference was going to be how everybody got there. Glad you liked it.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [6 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from arkeus
Review:
hum...Weird. I don't know how there can be so many inconsistencies between the world, and i hope you will explain that :-)
Review By [arkeus] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Introduction/Prologue" from arkeus
Review:
Intriguing. I guess it will be Xander centered, given a few indication... Also, i don't see how you can mix DBZ with BTVs given thqt there are already aliens in DBZ, and that they are way too strong :/
Review By [arkeus] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Awesome sreries so far keep p the great work.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from SaiyaSith
Review:
Excellent job again. Honestly, my vote is for a Buffy & Bol to work things out--at least for family's sake. I know Season 3 was alot about working things out, and Faith & stuff. Please let Joyce and Bol end up together! :-) Happy writing, I can't wait for pt 2.
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter twenty five" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Review:
Great story, I look forward to the Sequel
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [2 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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