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Review of chapter "Introductions" from BillieBog
I hope you come back with more. I like your stories.

Review By [BillieBog] • Date [19 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introductions" from dragonfan
So far, so good. You do need to add in a little more detail on the Wat group and the background of why Dawn ended up with the FBI, but all in all, good job.
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [6 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Putting the Clues together" from VillageOrchid
Some interesting things happening in the story. I don't really have a handle on Dawn's characterization yet, other than she's spunky. I haven't watched Without A Trace enough to know the charcter's too well. Could you describe Danny more than he's hispanic-looking? I really like that Eric Close guy who was the lead in "Now and Again" but I don't know his character name. Okay right now the story has potential, but I'd grade it a 6 out of 10 for effective story and story-telling.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Putting the Clues together" from dragonfan
I'm keeping an eye on this one. I want to know how Dru screwed up and what that's going to mean for Danny.
Review By [dragonfan] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
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