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Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from FicChick
Review:
I liked this series. The plot progressed at a realistic pace. The characters were depicted as barely functional enough to be believable without going over the line into becoming so unpleasant that I wouldn't want to read about them. The psychology was interesting.
Review By [FicChick] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from Jinxy
Review:
Awesome end to an awesome series...how far they've all come. I love that you brought Buffy and others into this one, it's really come full circle and I'm eager to read more of your works.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for your reviews Jinxy, I'm glad you enjoyed my X-files series.
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from SilverWave
Review:
Well this is a little spooky, coming back to this story and seeing my previous review of almost exactly a year a go.

Still one of the best stories I have read.

Cheers.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you still think that, you are too kind.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from SilverWave
Review:
Heh first rate, if a little close to the bone ;)

Thanks :)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [11 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from banner
Review:
I just found this series, and I spent the afternoon and evening reading it straight through. I've been riveted. I loved so many things about it. The last scenes in Sunnydale were terrific, especially.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much, I was considering deleting the last two stories but your review has made me change my mind.
Review By [banner] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
sweet ending!
Comments from author:
Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [5 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from hollywoude
Review:
I can't tell you how much I Loved this story and the 2 before it. This is now my favorite pairing!! Love Krycek. Keep up the great work. And though you probably don't plan another story, I'd love to see more!
Great job,again. Your a gifted writer.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I know people were following the stories but so few review.

And I know I got as far away from cannon as was possible to get for both btvs and x-files by story three.

So I'm really glad you liked that pairing. (or triangle if you throw Wesley in there) Because I worried, that describing a functional couple (in their own weird way) in a long term relationship in Whedonverse might not be that exciting for a reader.

Especially a Faith pairing, because she often seems to be written as a nymphomaniac slut unless she is with Xander. Xander and Faith as a pairing. Eugh!

However I don't think that I will ever write another story featuring my favorite sociopaths. (Alex is the true patriotic sociopath. Faith was just insane.)

I did however get all my Faith Wesley angst out of my system and wrote a straight buffyverse separate story where they are a couple. So I feel fulfilled.

Maybe I might write a Wesley Cordelia spin off sometime but would have to get back in the X-files Universe. Hmmm. Maybe they could be helping Mulder and Scully.

Thank you again you have given me an idea.
Review By [hollywoude] • Date [29 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from Cutiepie
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And yet, Wesley didn't end in a horrible-awful death! I'm so disappointed. (j/k) You killed off Willow, Xander and even Wood and Andrew, so why did Buffy manage to survive after all? It would have made more sense to me for the entire "Scooby Gang" to go down with the town. I guess you just didn't want to saddle Faith with the whole "eldest slayer" bit, huh?

A lovely ending to the series, and now I'm wanting another baby more than ever. Thanks for the little mention in the final notes. It made me smile. =]
Comments from author:
Wesley meet a sticky end? Well no, because it was consensual rape and Wesley felt bad about it. He was insane too okay? What, he is not allowed to seek redemption too?

Why did Buffy survive? I thought I explained that better than the series. She was immortal. Probably because of her free loading red headed friend's supernatural meddling. I mean why didn't Buffy die of that mortal stomach wound in Chosen? But it was Dawn really, it was just too depressing a concept for her to be brought up by Giles and Anya or her Dad. She needed Buffy and it would be a total downer to kill the sixteen year old. I liked Dawn.

Yeah it was my story, so every one I found irritating died and everyone I wished would live eg first Alex and then finally Wesley, Cordelia and Anya lived. God bless fan fiction.

You want another baby? Well I hope with my handy anticontraceptive hint, you can now pull one over succesfully on your partner. (joke)
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [21 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from MusesInspire
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Awwww shucks! You're makin' me blush! LOL

I'm actually kind of sorry to see the end of the series come at last... this has been the pregnancy from hell and this series has kept me distracted! :-) I'm glad you liked the artwork that I have done thus far... I've really enjoyed creating it for you! Maybe you have inspired MY muse enough to do some solo work!

This has been an enjoyable ride... and I hope that there are many more to come! Good work, girl! Keep it up! :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you again. I'm glad you liked Alex's manipulation of Faith in the end. He wouldn't be able to help himself, he's a control freak and he's a ratboy.

I'm glad the series has come to an end. It was interesting for me anyway, to write about that long stage a couple goes through, before they get married. But it was getting ridiculous that Alex just didn't bloody propose! I'll never back myself into a corner like that again.

I do wonder if they would last long term as a couple. I think so, they do love each other. Alex has been able to steer Faith in the directions he wanted her to go but she is growing up and becoming less biddable. She's still pretty dependent on him now because of the babies, but when she hits thirty, oh trouble ahead. As people pointed out would she be really happy to go back to Russia with him?

Good luck with a safe delivery!
Review By [MusesInspire] • Date [20 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Killing Time" from JennyLal
Review:
Wow! Anya lives, Xander dies, Willow dies and I get mentioned at the end. Greatest ending ever! Thanks for the great read.
Comments from author:
You missed I killed Wood too. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [20 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Touched" from JennyLal
Review:
Great chapter. You managed to make it hot and tender which is quite a feat. I love the pairing of Giles and Anya - they just seem to complement each other. I'm trying to work out where you're going now. Will Buffy find the scythe and kill Caleb or will it be a joint effort between her and Faith. Looking forward to seeing how you continue.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you like Giles and Anya I always thought they had real potential as a couple.

Yes Buffy will find the scythe but who she is with will be revealed in the next chapter.
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [26 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Touched" from Cutiepie
Review:
I think that this will convey my feelings: =D
Comments from author:
Thank you I'm glad you liked it. I was very nervous about writing this chapter.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [26 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take this job and shove it" from Cutiepie
Review:
First, you had Buffy as having brown eyes (the almost-kiss) but she doesn't have brown eyes. Green or hazel, I might even believe blue, but definitely not brown.

Next, Oz and Mari together would not constitute bestiality (full human with full animal). Not even Willow and Oz would quite make it, since a werewolf is only half-animal. The closest you could get is pseudo-bestiality. Since both Oz and Mari are werewolves, it is just were-mating. =]

Uh, thanks for the Kennedy-bashing bits. I enjoyed them. I'm bummed that you had Xander lose his eye (even though it was in canon) and . . . what else was there? I know there was something else I wanted to comment on, but now I can't remember. I guess I'll have to get back to you on that. =[

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OK, I knew that she wasn't naturally blonde (I doubt anyone thought she was, considering the roots that occasionally showed up) but I would have to take your word for it on the brown eyes. In the pictures that I found on the web (where I could make any determination at all) they appeared to be blue-grey. [http://www.smgfan.com/pictures_renamed_050903/buffy/buffy042.jpg] Perhaps she does wear contacts on occasion. Look at [http://www.buffy-vs-angel.com/images/smg181.jpg] and they are again blue-grey. I kind of have the feeling that is her actual color. =]
Comments from author:
No Sarah Michelle Gellar really does have brown eyes I looked at eight different close up photos of her in disbelief to check this out. She is not a natural blonde. Check out a web page if you don't believe me.

The Kennedy bashing hasn't even begun yet.

Thank you for the Bestiality opinion as well. (I can't believe I just typed that sentence.)

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My god you're right now check out

http://www.buffy-vs-angel.com/images/smg184.jpg

Does the woman wear contacts?

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Okay I'm changing it to hazel. that's nice and vague.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [24 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "He will wait until..." from ajax
Review:
Can't express how much I love this story. Best Krycek voice evah! I hope you are planning to be nice to Xander, he really got treated like crap in canon. His family is strikingly similar to the Malones; his whole life has been trying not to be like them. Also he did try to help Faith, and he is loyal: Faith admires loyalty.
Comments from author:
I never thought Xander's family were criminal, just alcoholics.

True he is loyal, I was planning on following canon a lot with him. In fact where I divert he will be worse off.

I'm glad you like my version of Krycek. Thank you very much for your review.
Review By [ajax] • Date [21 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Your lips a magic world" from Cutiepie
Review:
Oooh, ooh, can you have Wesley wear the amulet-thingie? Or be in Anya's place instead of Anya when that Bringer swings his axe? Andrew can tell his "comforting lie" about Wesley instead of Anya then. Of course, Alex still wants/needs a swing at the slime, but I don't want him to have misplaced guilt or whatever. Just don't let Wes die a "heroic" death by saving someone. That would lessen my contempt for him. =]

Um . . . I'd like to see Willow realize what a whiny baby Kennedy is, and that she could really do better. Much better. Are you following through with the "call all the potentials" bit? You have changed enough stuff that I can't be certain that anything will stay the same. =D I know that you won't let Faith end up with Wood (controlling little mama's boy that he is), so I don't have to worry about that. Anyway, whatever you do, I'll be here to read it!
Comments from author:
I love your oooh oohs I can so hear them in my head. Thank you for your input it really helps. If you want Wesley to be truly depraved I can have him rape Dawn if you'd like. Nah just kidding I did consider him seducing her though.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [18 Oct 06] • Not Rated
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