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Review of chapter "Link to info for Planetary" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Oooookaaaay.... Nice teaser, where's the beef?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [17 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Link to info for Planetary" from daveykins
Review:
Looking forward to further chapters :)
Review By [daveykins] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Link to info for Planetary" from junnights
Review:
interesting:) never heard of the comic:P but sounds interensting:) hope a new chapter comes soon.

Hildegunn
Comments from author:
I'm working on a new chapter. It's not at the top of the list, so I can't give you a definite idea as to when it'll be posted.
Review By [junnights] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Link to info for Planetary" from Greywizard
Review:
Any idea if and when this might be updated?

Because this just screams for another dozen chapters or so. ;-)
Comments from author:
I actually have been working on the next chapter every once and awhile. Kinda of waiting to see how the Planetary series plays out before I go all out in getting the next chapter out.

update. I finally am working on this story with a clearer idea of where I want it to go. One problem I had was to figure out a planetary type adventure to write about, having done that I am back to work.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [25 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Link to info for Planetary" from krtshadow
Review:
Really looking forward to more of this fic. Planetary is new to me, but it seems like it could be a realistic x-over. Sure hope you haven't ditched this story, 'cause I think it has promise.
Review By [krtshadow] • Date [20 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Link to info for Planetary" from FairyQilan
Review:
Interesting. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Review By [FairyQilan] • Date [6 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Link to info for Planetary" from Nyn
Review:
Thank you for that link! I am Officially Fascinated!
Review By [Nyn] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Link to info for Planetary" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Nice to see another Planetary cross, hope to see more soon.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Link to info for Planetary" from Greywizard
Review:
I really, really, REALLY like this idea, and I hope we see more of this story in the future.

I also like the fact that you had Buffy and Giles both immediately recognized that they screwed up and wanted to rectify the situation, but were unable to do so because of time constraints, not because they didn't realize their mistake.

I'm looking forward to seeing Willow's reaction to finding out that Xander has left, and seeing what she does to try to get him to return.

Finally , when is this set in the Planetary time period?
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jackattack
Review:
Now THIS is an interesting cross! I'd love to see more, even if only to see what "orientation" is like for a newcomer to the Planetary organization.

I like that you aren't belaboring exactly what was said, and requiring direct rebuttal for every single word. You are giving the other characters a break that most authors won't by making them immediately regret what was said, and by introducing a NEW character to be the completely unforgiveable one. And Andrew is finally used effectively -- sensitive without being simpering, eager to intervene but not annoying.

I really hope that you will continue this story, whether as a continuous narrative or a series of independent anecdotes. You have an excellent premise, your pacing is good, and the logic behind every character's motivations is rock solid. This, or something else, KEEP WRITING!
Review By [jackattack] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
I'm a Planetary fan, but they did have this habit of hiring superhumans. That makes me more than a bit curious as to this story's direciton....
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from michaelangelo
Review:
Nice story, muchly liked it. I'm guessing Buffy and Giles told Xander they didn't want him "in the way", are ya gonna give Xander his own superpower or give him the role of Elijah Snow?.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thewander
Review:
Ok, nice start, but Humm whats the cross?
Review By [Thewander] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nyn
Review:
But...um...what did Buffy and Giles actually SAY to Xander?

I liked this beginning. I don't know what Planetary is, but I'm interested to find out.
Comments from author:
Review By [Nyn] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Swedish
Review:
YES! Planetary! It was obvious as soon as the words "White suit" were mentioned. Funny enough, I liked Andrew in this one - even though I usually loathe him. Well, I'm looking forward to further parts - any hint about the time line in regards to Planetary?
Well, thanks a lot.
Review By [Swedish] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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