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Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from Gideon
Review:
That is a useful power that Paige has, if her charge is going to be kidnapped a lot :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Wonderful ending! And go Paige, for completely disregarding the battle that just ended. Who are the other two nephews mentioned? Great story!
Comments from author:
Eh, she's used to demon battles. LOL Paige's nephews are Wyatt and Chris, her sister Piper's half whitelighter sons. Piper and her husband Leo have three children altogether, the oldest is a girl named Amber. Leo is the whitelighter for all three Charmed Ones and is Paige's mentor.
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from dreameralways
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Will this be Dean/Paige b/c that could actually work. You'd have a magic user to teach the baby and she could actually help in a fight. Plus, it wouldn't matter where she worked or lived b/c she could just orb to be with her sisters or Dean.
This is a really cute story and I am finding it quite enjoyable. Thank you for writing it.
Comments from author:
As much as I agree with you, here Dean is having to grow up a little bit more because of the twins and Paige is still in that early twenties wild stage. I'm leaning more towards Dean/Phoebe as she's gone through the same process.

Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from Kirallie
Review:
Good work!! Poor Dean knowing his kids have been tagged by the PTB already. Stupid Powers! Liked Paige's intro.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Stupid powers or evil author? I'm not telling. ;)
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from Winchestergrl
Review:
Very intriguing. Very abrupt ending. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Can't wait to read more. Very great series
Comments from author:
Thanks. The abrupt ending was because the next story takes up right where this one left off.
Review By [Winchestergrl] • Date [11 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from Ansku
Review:
Intriguing :) Ends a bit abruptly, though...
Comments from author:
That's because the next one picks right up where this one left off.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [12 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from LMiC
Review:
Very cool entrance. I haven't said it lately but great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I think the boys are going to have some questions!
Review By [LMiC] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from Yasuko
Review:
This series is really good. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you. It's not over yet, I promise.
Review By [Yasuko] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from (Past Donor)LunyKimberly
Review:
Awesome, awesome, awesome, *awesome*!!! Totally loved this story (and part). And yay Charmed girls coming into the mix! That oughta shake things up a smidge...or at least add to the overall chaos considering both families are mega trouble magnets. ::grins::

Um couple questions... near the beginning when Jess is telling herself she needs to learn as much as possible for the Watcher-in-training - I think you meant to switch the words "partner" and "Watcher" cuz the way it's reading right now gives the impression that Jess is going to be the Watcher for Mary's future partner, not that Jess is going to be the partner/co-Watcher for Mary.

Also, you mentioned in a couple other reviews that Prue is still alive... is she the mother for the third Hallilwell kid or are one of the others? Cuz Charmed cannon has Wyatt and Chris by Piper and Leo as the only kids (not counting the Charmed-cubed kids from the future 'verse we saw at the end of season eight).
Comments from author:
Thank you! Yeah, I just had to shake things up a bit.

Yes, that's right. Mary will have a partner Slayer and Jess has volunteered to be her Watcher.

I'm going AU for Charmed. I'm adding in the future possible child that we saw back when Prue was still alive, a little girl. I don't remember what her name was but she was Piper and Leo's daughter. So that means for this story, Wyatt and Chris have a big sister. Prue is still dating her cop and Pheobe and Paige are unattached.
Review By [(Past Donor)LunyKimberly] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from (Past Donor)gbholderness
Review:
GENIUS!!!!!!!!!
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Comments from author:
I really haven't been as happy with this story as I was in the beginning. I finally figured it out that it wasn't the fact that I didn't have enough characters, it was that most of them are oc's. I really like multiple crosses. So, I decided to add in yet another fandom.
Review By [(Past Donor)gbholderness] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from Rhyssia
Review:
... you aren't allowed to stop there. Absolutely not! *whines*
Comments from author:
The next story picks up where this one leaves off, so don't worry. It opens with Paige staring down three guns while holding the twins.
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from SaiyaSith
Review:
I've really enjoyed this series. You've done a fantastic job--all the characters are done very realistic, and you've merged the Buffy/Supernatural storyline exceedingly well. Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Look for the next story's first chapter, it'll be out soon.
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from Wynde
Review:
Another great chapter. I'm really enjoying this follow-up to LA Demon Riots. It's really funny that you decided to use Paige as Johnny's Whiteligther/Teacher. My first thought of a perfect teacher for Johnny was ghostly Prue Halliwell. I thought she'd be good at helping him find a balance and, okay, I could just imagine the great snarkfest/UST that would occur between her and Dean.
Comments from author:
Oh don't count Prue out! I'm going AU with Charmed because I didn't like losing Prue. So Paige isn't a Charmed One, she's just their little sister. She's got kick ass magic but she more follows the White Lighter path, taking on 'special' charges that don't fall under needing a regular White Lighter. Oh, she also won't be his teacher, so Prue might be up for that.
Review By [Wynde] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
Please say no to Paige/Dean romance. Dean needs.... well he doens't need one of the Charmed girls
Comments from author:
Actually I was thinking Dean/Phoebe. He needs a girl who can kick ass and who won't care about his being a Hunter/Watcher.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snake Demons are Stupid" from spk
Review:
Very nice introduction of Charmed into the story. I like the idea of Paige being Johnny's Whitelighter. :)
Comments from author:
He's a Winchester, they tend to get into trouble early! So he's going to need a slightly more powerful White Lighter to keep up with him. heheheheh
Review By [spk] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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