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Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Essential Hysteria" from Harry
Review:
OK. Enough is enough. We've seen Red go dark. And now, with this outburst, it should start sounding Cerebro's alarms so that the X-Men know that a new mutant has been found. Wait till they get to Sunnydale and see the resemblance between Willow and Jean. Talk about heads turning!
Review By [Harry] • Date [24 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Essential Hysteria" from Den
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I love this story, very epic! I hope you will continue it after all this time. I would rather like to see what happens when Willow and Jean meet.
Comments from author:
Oh, thank you. It is not an impossibility I will come back to this story (I have certianlly thought about it before) but I do have many other stories farther up the qeue in my brain. *laughs* I am very glad you like what I wrote so far though - and I thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [Den] • Date [17 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Alliteration" from (Current Donor)hols
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I have only just found this story and I really like what you have written so far so I hope you decided to update this story
Review By [(Current Donor)hols] • Date [24 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Essential Hysteria" from MBB
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An interesting and promising story.
I'm glad you went with (old/)high-school Willow, as I really enjoyed their friendships back then, and the less over the top magic.
Which has me somewhat worried when you started writing her with speed-up magical skills.
It's later problems give it some sense for the story, but I rather see that the magic and mutant powers keep separated (even if Willow were to develop mutant mental skills)

And as you have most of Oz' lines unspoken in his head, there is no-one who can say one way or they other if he thought them on the show.
Although I do like it, the alliteration does keep making me think of him as Dexter. :P (That he mutilates Bunnies in wolf-form doesn't help)
Comments from author:
Why thank you for heading on over to this story as well! :)

As for Willow's sped up powers, well, when I started writing this story it was basically on the premise of all the similarities I had seen in a Phoenix/Jean Grey and a later-Willow. With making them related I could play with that but I didn't want to make one wildly more powerful than the other. I'm not sure if Willow's powers (mutant and magic) are two separate things or not.....This was actually one of the first fanfics I wrote and it's been a while since I played around with it. I hope to come back to it one day but I haven't been working on it lately.

When it comes to Oz, I remember him being hard to write in that chapter but he was one of those side characters that I just loved on that show. And I've never seen Dexter - alliteration is just one of those things that always actually catches my eye and I am awfully fond of.

Thanks again for commenting, MBB!
Review By [MBB] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Essential Hysteria" from LeaFairy
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Great story so far! I love the idea of Willow and Jean as sisters. I'm also loving the Willow/Oz goodness and I'm intrigued by Willow's uncontrollable powers and the 'voice' she hears in her head that's trying to temp her.

I look forward to reading more! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: Essential Hysteria" from deathgeonous
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Huh, this looks like it'll be very interesting. I can't wait for more. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now. Oh, and I'm guessing that this is movie verse X-Men, am I right?
Comments from author:
Yuppers, movie-verse it is.

Thanks for the comment.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [15 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Alliteration" from Markelo
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Okay, so Jean's Willow's older sister?

Okay. Jean was in her late twenties, I think, in the first movie.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [11 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Alliteration" from firedrakegirl
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Please update this story! It has so much potential!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [27 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Alliteration" from aygul
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I hope you update this, it could be really interesting. I'd like to find which, if any, of Willow's powers are from her being a mutant. I'm not a big fan of most Willow het, but I love Oz, so I can deal.
Review By [aygul] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Alliteration" from (Past Donor)lckybr
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Interesting...sigh i love Willow...
Review By [(Past Donor)lckybr] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Alliteration" from queenoftheaces
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I really like I hope you update very soon.
Review By [queenoftheaces] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Alliteration" from MercyJones
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Neato! Like the idea of Willow being Jean's sister. Can't wait for them to meet!
Review By [MercyJones] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Alliteration" from Harry
Review:
When Willow goes Dark like that, it can only spell TROUBLE! A sort of trouble that will cause all sorts of headaches in the future! PLEASE, hurry up and post a new chapter! I want to see what happens when Willow and Jean meet!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing all of the chapters Harry.

I will update when it comes to me, my muses are incredibly fickle. I've actually written two chapters for a completely different fic when I should have been working on this one. *sigh*
You'll have to wait a bit though, there will probably be at least two more chapters before Willow and Jean finally meet.

I apologise to you and everyone else for the huge gap between posting. Please stick with me and be as patient as possible.
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Decisions" from Harry
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If a powerful Tk/Tp like Jean meets up with one of the most powerful witches in Willow, I smell a MAJOR explosion of power that will shake a lot of dimensions! Look out Sunnydale, things are about to get SCARY!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Power" from Harry
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Black eyes: YIKES! I smell Dark Willow about to surface!! And that is NOT a good thing. No, not at all!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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