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Review of chapter "Mad World" from TimeVortex
Review:
This is good. Are you writing more?
Review By [TimeVortex] • Date [4 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mad World" from SpacedCadet
Review:
This was a great start, I'm sorry you never did more!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [14 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad World" from BrownFinderth
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Very lovely story. Hopefully, Dawn settled down to life in Star Hollow. If the author could be able to finish the story, it'd be great news for us readers! So, please, finish it?
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [3 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad World" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very very nice!

Please do more.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad World" from DemonChildeKyra
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I LOVE this! I really like Protective!Spike. I definitely hope to see this get continued. More, please? Pretty, pretty please?

~ Kyra
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mad World" from carmsfic
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This is a wonderful story. I hope you can continue it. Will this story include the April storyline or will Dawn's presence be the upheaval? Please please please post more soon.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [24 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mad World" from zigpal
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I really love this story, and I hope you continue soon now that Spike and Luke have come to an agreement, and between that and the help of Lorelai and Rory, maybe Dawn will finally get an assemblance of family for the first time in a while.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [17 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mad World" from MinaLynn
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This is really good. I haven't read many GG/BTVS xovers and so far this one is great.
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [16 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad World" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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I loved this chapter, especially Spike. It seems almost out of character to have pre-soul Spike spilling his guts like that, but he was pretty torn up after Joyce and Buffy died, so it does make sense. Other than that quasi-quibble, I love the characterizations in this story.

Thanks for sharing this! I look forward to the next update. :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I know that it's a little out of character for Spike to do that, but he'll be back to his soulless self in no time.

~Spunky
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [30 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad World" from HunterH
Review:
i love this story can't wait to read more.
Review By [HunterH] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad World" from RevDorothyL
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Awwww --- I love the meeting of minds between Spike and Luke, there at the end. Plus, I think it's great the way Dawn's tragedy and loss has apparently motivated Lorelai and Rory to mend their fences months earlier than they did in the series (putting things into proper perspective, as it were).

Also, the Rory/Lorelai babble was very well done. Of course, I couldn't let this bit -- "the name of the most famous hooker in the Bible" -- pass entirely without comment (however perfectly it matched Lorelai's style of dialogue), since one of the minor frustrations of my life as a teacher of college bible courses is the way my students cling to the belief that somewhere in the bible there's some suggestion or even a hint that Mary Magdalene was EVER a hooker or adultress or anything even remotely disreputable or salacious (there absolutely isn't even the whisper of a hint of a suggestion anywhere in the canonical New Testament -- that's all post-biblical 2nd- or 3rd-century church gossip, manufactured out of whole cloth).

There, now! I feel better for having gotten that every-semester-rant off of my chest, once again!
Comments from author:
Hey, thanks for the review. I know what you mean about the Mary thing, but the Gilmores aren't big on the whole church-going stuff, so I figured that'd be the general interpretation.

~Spunky
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mad World" from melissouza
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I am loving this! Good for Spike, keeping his eye on Dawn, she needs it. Star's hollow is not filled with demons but is definitely not normal LOL
Review By [melissouza] • Date [24 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mad World" from UniilaDellaLuna
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ahhhh! Spike and Luke bonding! I like how Spike explained Sunnyhell much better then some peoples. I can't wait to see the intro with the girls.
Review By [UniilaDellaLuna] • Date [23 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mad World" from littleoldme
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I'm so glad that Rory and Lorelai reunited, and I think you handled it perfectly. Having seen what Dawn has lost, Lorelai would have figured out what she was missing in Rory a whole lot sooner. You're writing the Gilmores' dialogue really well. I loved Lor's shpiel about Miss Congeniality 2. Not terribly fond of the phonetic spelling of Spike's dialogue, but I can live with it. Hope to see an update soon.
Comments from author:
yeah, Spike's spelling; not too crazy about that myself, and I 'm gonna be going back and fixing it as soon as I get the chance. I'm glad you like the story though!

~Spunky
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [23 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mad World" from PrimitivePixx
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I've really been enjoying this story so far, but the first part of this chapter, the phone call between Rory and Lorelei, seems a bit too convenient. Too much information without any character involvement. It seems like a chapter summary without the chapter and I know you could write an awesome chapter for that conversations backstory.

Hope to read more soon...
Comments from author:
hey, thanks for the review. yeah, the phone convo was there for a reason; I have a ton of stuff I want to get to, and some backstory stuff that just was easier to have people find out about through a little Gilmore phone-gossip. there's lots of things coming up that I'm wracking my brain trying to find a way to piece together (seriously-bringing Cordy to SH for some reason and getting Dawn and Tristian together? This is one crazy challenge) and a summary-type thing was the most entertaiing way of getting information across that I could think of.

~Spunky
Review By [PrimitivePixx] • Date [23 Nov 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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