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Review of chapter "Dreams" from Vashti
Review:
Nice. I wish you'd gone further with it but it was very enjoyable.
Review By [Vashti] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
You should mark this complete. I almost skipped it because it wasn't 'finished', but it's done and it's a great read. Not everything gets tied up neatly. Love cheeseman.

Blue
Comments from author:
You're right. I had intended to continue it, but it's been ages since I updated it, and it is at a good stopping point.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [18 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams" from Booster
Review:
*snerk* The Cheeseman rules all. Great fun, Don.
Review By [Booster] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
You know, pretty much anything that has apppropriate use of the Cheese Man has my approval. He's just so . . . random.

I liked the touch about nightmares, too. Lilly was very much an in-the-moment person. AFter I read that bit, that was something that just clicked and made sense.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Yay the cheese man!
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [15 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Above the Fold" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent work! I always liked the chemistry between V and L in the flashbacks on the show. I hope we can see the two fight off the rest of the world together. I think V would make a great Watcher. BTW, does V's mom still run off? Just wondering.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Above the Fold" from littleoldme
Review:
You're jumping around between present and past tense quite a bit. I'm enjoying the plot, but the super short chapters make the story ultra choppy. I think another format would probably serve you better.
Comments from author:
I fixed the verb tenses.

Having each chapter be a 100 word drabble is something I'm trying out, since Marcus started this with a drabble.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Above the Fold" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Interesting way on writing...short chapters an' such.

I hope you finish this story as it looks as if it could be really good. I will keep a look out for more.

One of these days I'm going to have to buy the first season of Veronica Mars. It's never been on TV or on a channel I've got where I live.

All the Best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beginning the Investigation" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
I'm glad you decided to continue the bit MR started. Should be interesting, but tough, maybe? I think Lily is probably one of those characters easier to like when she's dead.

Oops. I'm sorry. My computer and I bickered. It obviously won, and I accidently double-posted. This was not meant as an extra post to emphasize my opinion on how difficult it is to make Lily both entertaining, likeable, and in-character.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [21 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning the Investigation" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
I'm glad you decided to continue the bit MR started. Should be interesting, but tough, maybe? I think Lily is probably one of those characters easier to like when she's dead.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [21 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning the Investigation" from CPTSkip
Review:
That Keith is one smart cookie. But I wonder what he would make of Lily becoming a Slayer. ;-)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Covering it Up" from CPTSkip
Review:
Boy, somehow I missed this. Excellent continuation of Marcus' drabble. I would love to see more. Hint, hint anyone?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Covering it Up" from BrendanM
Review:
Nice.

That's our 'Ronnie!

Two thumbs up!
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [17 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Covering it Up" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Nice to see someone take up the challenge. Many thanks! Be interesting to see where this goes.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [17 Oct 06] • Not Rated
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